Very stale and cleche mc is retarded and ruins story a good concept though trash lkmit trash limtinbjnnnnnnh fleeing Biden green bruh nuff gift gift but then Nanking funky drug
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Review based on the 1st Chapter.Good job to the Translator and Editor. The chapter feels very well translated and with few errors. The first chapter seems quite interesting with the world set up and the surprising realistic behavior of the MC. MC doesn't seem to be a beta which is more than I can ask for.
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Needs a few grammar corrections... getting into lecture mode explaining the levels of power and whatnot of the universe is a bit forced could be more natural with hints here and there to make us get it. But nevertheless a good story so far will continue to read it
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Although it isn't tagged with romance, I really felt the romantic atmosphere. I know this series is aready completed, but I wish I could read on more of what their life would have been like if they had to go through the heavenly wars or how doting of parents they might've become. Good job author! The attention to detail of the characters' personalities and thoughts were well thought out. With all the mature tags, I didn't expect the story would become really cute in the end.I loved it! I really see potential for mature romance novels!
Finally found something good after reading a few light novels with bad grammar and low writing skills. Keep the good work up. I recommend this to every game lover as well as none lovers.
Initially did not like the usage of cryptic english. However, since changes have been made to the translation, it is a lot better and very much an enjoyable read. MC story is interesting and there's always surprises in every chapter! Keep it up!
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