ThaliaIlace
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
This book was added to my library as soon as I finished the synopsis. The author’s sense of humor gets me every single time and I already really like it. World Background can’t possibly be built but I’m sure that you atleast know some of these tropes and can therefore think of their families and everything. The update rate so far has been good and well eventually you run out of idea for this kinda stuff unless you plan to spend the rest of your life reading garbage webnovels so I guess at one point it will be irregular. All I can say is that this is a sort of shooting star, one that I’ll really enjoy... or maybe it won’t, maybe the author will churn out tropes that’ll have me rolling on the floor. Just keep up the good work author?
I still can't understand why you decided to rewrite this story and change it when the other version was good but okay, well this is pretty good but not my liking.
A more “savoury” version of my review at 80 chapters: This is a peak-tier gem.
Writing Quality: Pleasant- Very few grammar mistakes and a good level of dialogue-text. System text presented clearly. 5 stars
Updating stability: 1ch/day- Great in my books. One of my only gripes with this novel though is the short chapters… some conversations spill into the next chapter which can break immersion. The release frequency balances that out so not detrimental. 4 stars
Story development: There’s an established overarching goal and arc goal. It works towards meeting the arc goal with great storytelling and interesting developments and schemes in the background. Probably the best point about the novel. Lemons do not detract from the experience- in some scenes it’s described, whereas others are just post-coital conversations, something I’m grateful for! No dragging of lemons across several chapters + the novel isn’t all about seducing females to get to the top, though that is a part of the MC’s success. 5 stars
Characters: The MC is perfect! Rational, practical, good at
The conversation seems so fake and cringe
I have followed this work since it first came out. And to this day I have not been disappointed. MC plans well, but is far from omnipotent. The pace of the story doesn't feel rushed at all. I'm glad author goes back and revises all the small spelling and grammar issues I point out. The only thing I'm sad about is the fact that I'm too poor to buy coins and have to wait for updates. ? If nothing else, keep on author!
I found.this very entertaining, a fun story. so far the story is fairly slow paced but this let's it build its world background and characters. this story is also written fairly well
I wasn't sure what to expect when I picked up this book, but I was pleasantly surprised! The Bookstore Mage is a delightful fantasy novel that had me hooked from the very first page. Lucien, the main character, is a likeable and relatable protagonist who is thrust into a world of magic and mystery following the death of his grandfather. I loved watching him grow and change as he learned more about his grandfather's magical abilities, and the supporting cast of characters were all well-developed and entertaining. The story was fast-paced and engaging, and I found myself eager to find out what would happen next. I would highly recommend this book to anyone looking for a fun read!
Honestly, I loved the first 310 or so chapters, translation was good, world building and power system had some good ideas, story was developing and enough to keep me interested. This book really focused on the storylines of different players and how the gaming community would interact with a game like in the book. However, I rated this so low because it went on a long almost year long break with no updates, now it is back and the translation has taken a nosedive in quality, it seems almost machine translated with no proofreading. Recommend first 300 chapters, unless they fix the translation, don’t bother past that
It is noice. keeep reading.....................
Really good overall.
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
