wtf. zeno is very brave
Good story
This story stopped it's updates at chapters 14 after wetting our appetite... So disappointed.. There is need for mass chapter updates.. Though story is exciting.
Cleanly written and with an interesting premise, it's a compelling read for fans of the genre. I'm sure it'll keep getting better as the author writes more, definitely worth a read!
Loving this story so far!! From the MCs interactions with her family to her interactions with the system are amazing!! I cannot wait to read more and see what happens in future chapters!!!
i’ve read up to about chapter 90 and it’s been a great read so far i highly recommend it.
"This literary work undeniably earns its four stars, skillfully blending intrigue, character development, and a fluid writing style. An enriching read filled with surprises."
the writing and grammer should be worked upon I have only read chapter 1 so far but from what I see that's the major issue along with the MC not panicking or being more confused the tech integration doesn't seem flush either
Calidad de escritura (3/5), actualización de estabilidad (1/5), desarrollo de historia (2/5), diseño de personajes (2/5)Fondo de mundo (2/5)
This is a terrible translation. I gave up on the story because of this. it regularly has chapters telling different versions of the same part of the story, immediately after each other. (for example version one the master is looking for a new disciple, sees a promising recruit, and the rest of the chapter tells of the recruitment. But the next chapter is version two so suddenly the would be disciple has come to the sect to apply for membership, and the master notices this promising disciple for the first time and the chapter ends with the recruitment, only for the next chapter to be version three of this scenario of the master recruiting the disciple.) I dragged myself through two loops like this, and I just can't go through it again. It's frustrating because I think the actual original story is really good so if the issues were fixed, or if a whole new translation was added to the site, I would definitely give it another shot.
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I think you can add more power like aura control for helio he can control +ions and -ions , aura is a thin laker of +ions so I think helio was able to control opponent aura and mude for a little time like make opponent sad , Scared , berserk to feared for a little while