jesus christ. author please get your grammar right... you keep using simple past, past progressive and simple present but each of them incorrectly. Get an editor to help you. As of now unreadable by anyone with the faintest grasp of the english language...
unfortunately like most books this is also not picked up.....,.................................unfortunately like most books this is also not picked up.....,.................................
can anyone send raw chapter link ......................................................................................................................
Definitely a story with a heart. The MC has a very tender, painful backstory that will tug at your heartstrings. Her parents are just amazing though, I must say. The MC herself is very well portrayed, actions are congruent to her age. Her innocence also comes through in the writing. The writing itself is very good, only minor tense issues that do not take away from the story. The emotional core of the story is what hooks you on to it. Thank you, author. It will remain in my library as I look forward to reading the entire story. Great work!
you know why i rated it low despite liking it? just simple, you always mention ding! 125 exp increase but unlike any game there isn't even a character status or an exp bar! how do you if the mc levels up? according to the author's decision? what is the basis of ranking up? and there are skill points but no use! you have left too many holes to the story. i can barely stay reading it.
cant wait for more chapters. really Good.The best one so far amongst The New ones. Just hope it gets tons of New chapters to enjoy it.......
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Absolutely love this book! I loved watching the MCs personality change from a young teen stuck with romantic issues taking on challenges he wasn’t prepared for to a grown adult capable of putting the greater planetary-scale interests before his own personal affairs.The early chapters may be a bit hard to read but if you put yourself in the MCs shoes during your hormonal years, I’m sure you will be able to relate to his issues. The overall plot is much more serious and bigger than the MC and so it’s worthwhile to stick to the book and keep reading. You won’t regret it.The writing quality has improved by leaps and bounds over the course of the book and the story is not very predictable making you wait to see how things actually turn out. The author is very interactdive in the discord community which makes it a very refreshing reading experience, you should definitely check it out.
The story plot is very interesting, it's a great system story to read. The beginning gets one so hooked and you just keep reading, highly recommended.
TLDR: AMAZING, must read. Hope it stays this good.As mentioned previously by a different reviewer; a plant MC and Kingdom building is definitely a huge win. Not to mention the uniqueness of the story, even if not all that different from other system novels, makes it a great read. Although there are only 22 chapters, at the time of this review, and not enough time has passed for us to learn about the world background or new chapter speed, this is definitely going to become one of my favorite novels.The only cons of the story, so far, would have to be the occasional grammar mishap or the brain f**k when the author mixes a few words up. 10/10
I'm just gonna keep this simple. Dweia, the author, knows what she/he is doing. The other book on here written by her/him, 'A Remnant of The Ancients' hooks you as fast as this one. The end of each chapter has you craving for answers and thirsting for more. The spelling and grammar is flawless, and the character building is superb! Make sure you definitely give this book and the author a chance, I promise you won't miss out!
This is a fun and interesting novel. Worth the read if you like over power characters from the get go. ?MC is not extremely ruthless when it comes to his enemies, he could forgive others but he doesn't do anything half-assed and goes all the way but he's not afraid to let others know how strong he is and makes them regret being born; he has the right to be arrogant. I find these traits to be very rare for an OP MC especially when reading other power fantasy stories so this was a nice surprise. The plots and twists are well thought out. You will find a lot of interesting and diverse characters that add more life to this story.I love it, the plot is perfect it suits my taste.