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i interested in this story cuz of ring mc concept and romance tag and profile pic of the book.i expected some good development between ring and the owner girl as they grow alongside eachothe.but story stared to become boring after few chapters and still after 20 something chapter i don't get wat i wanted or expected like a good adventure and relationship MC IS A WASTE CHARACTER IN THIS STORY i hope you good luck for this story
I haven't encountered this type of genre before, my first time seeing a monster with system. It's looking like a Simulation kind of novel and it's nice and cool.
This story has a great amount of plot-holes and a mc with brain problems.To add to that the grammar is horrific and the author switches between perspectives(I/He).I personally can not see why this story has a rating with over 4 stars.Just going back and rereading/rewriting could improve the story imo, as the basic premise is quite decent.
I really wanted to like this, but I am fed up with this garbage.Firstly, the constant reference to manga/anime and the like is so cliche and unnecessary, while many might find it relatable, it's out of place, and doesn't inspire any confidence in both the author and protagonist.Secondly, the premise is ridiculous, he wasn't awake while every other single person on earth was... really? Then this supposedly grand being takes an undue interest in an otherwise ordinary, if not downright hopeless prospect. Why not groom someone who isn't such a pathetic fool? Lastly, the writing rubs me the wrong way, whether it's the first person narration, or transitioning to third person. While, there isn't anything wrong with first person, it's unconventional, and it doesn't help when you alternate to third person. Then there's the dialogue, which when you choose to have the protagonist converse with God, you aren't helping yourself out. The dialogue doesn't convey any depth or intricacy as it pertains to the speaker, which can be a hurdle, but when you have a supposedly nigh-omiscient character, I can't help but find it odd when he speaks as though he is a fledgling preteen. Which is only made worse when you capitalise his dialogue, and also include exclamation marks. I can understand the capitalisation, but unless he is actually shouting, there's no need to insert exclamation marks. Frankly you could've have done neither, and highlighted the manner of speech, either amplitude or depth, with dialogue tags. Overall, terrible characters, terrible writing, the story is a joke, and though I didn't see much of the world, I can only assume it would also be poorly developed.
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I like this novel so far, it’s really good!!!!!!!! I hate that we need to write 140 o4 something characters ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Starts out very ordinary, with bad grammar and little to no punctuation but the Author improves fairly quickly. The story has good potential and is very interesting.
I have read the initial chapters and I like how the story is setup with a non-mainstream theme of 'Mafia'. The established world of the novel has lot of potential for exciting development. Also the main protagonist is neither OP nor to lack in power, with a good contrasting personality trait which give a plus point to this novel. If the author focuses on main story without much overloading the chapter with unimportant stuff, the novel will become much more exciting. It will definitely grew into top rank novel.
So i just found this novel, and i read it to 3rd chapter and now i love this novel. Hail Author, Hail Author, Hail Author... Is 140 words or something like that done yet?
I love the MC and other characters are actually living breathing people with their own problems and personality. The world settings is still been revealed as the novel is still at its initial stages overall it has potential but my only problem is the Romance I'd rather have no romance than forced romance the MC has never had a good opinion of Qin Yan she's beautiful and talented but that's it countless other females in the sect possess the exact same qualities but the MC has never been shown as one chasing after beauty. Yet she gave him an ultimatum with even asking for his opinion . Yet the next moment he has her name been mentioned he couldn't help but send her a letter ???????? Pls Don't ruin this great novel with bland tasteless romance . A great novel is not defined by the number of jade skined beauties chasing after the MC or by the number of girls the MC has slept with . Pls author don't go down that road...