Great book, let’s hope it will be published outside of the preview. If you liked LOHP you’ll love this one too.
MC is super cool and almost indestructible . I like it's plot very much . The story has got potential. Keep it up author!!!! Ps. Please introduce some strong villains also . Thnx for the novel
copy-paste of "The first order"... It's a bit sad to see people obviously copying other works... I mean, it's okay if the MC'S ability is the same, but there, the "author" copied even the personality of the characters, their bonds... it's a bit too much... This said, it's a copy of a great work, so it's good for those who didn't read the original.
I've learned a tremendous deal about writing since The Ancients World. My other works are at a much higher level.This is my latest venture, A new story in the fantasy VRMMORPG genre. It's going to be updated on a semi-regular basis on Webnovel, and every day on my P-a-t-r-e-o-n. I can only hope that people enjoy this story more than The Ancients World. It's benefitting from all the mistakes I've made about my writing.
Overall, the plot is great. It really is entertaining to see Seong-Min grind so easily and there is also a huge anticipation of when he finally breaks out of poverty. The MC got that personality and story you just want to see him succeed. The progress is also okay, but I have to say it is a bit faster than I want. The sentence construction can be improved. But the coherency is there. A lot of readers might get turned by the way it was written, but I think the story itself is worth staying for. For our MC- he's obviously OP in the game and might never find a predicament where he might get challenged fully. I hope events to challenge his abilities in the game appears.
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A very well written story that draws you in and leaves you wanting more. The character design and world building are top notch, which, alongside the excellent story development make for a extremely entertaining novel. (Fair warning that this novel whilst based in the Star Wars universe is not written canonically.)♠️?
Ok it was a great book I usually read books with some art but this this is amazing I still have more to read because I fell asleep last night reading it 10/10
Soo... he got killed in an among us tournament so he got drunk and quit the game. You can't make this stuff up.. idk what the authors goal is but it's over 1200 chapters so it doesn't seem to be a joke. Too many weird phrasings to seem like a coincidence though.. ?
10/10 love this book!Writing quality is great and the author puts in a lot of work,Stable updates and author doesnt burn themselvs out so no need to worry about it being droppedStory is developing wonderfully the world is fleshing out and nothing looks scuffed the author thinks before building so it doesnt fall over like a jenga towerCharacters are fleshed out have their own personalitys and backround they feel relatabel abd real Nothing i can say about the world backround other than 10/10
This book is honestly amazing and theres many too many reasons why people should read it. This novel has such lively characters with each having their own beliefs and priorities with an example being the 2 main characters priority is their mother(read to understand why) but while for Luke this is his main responsibility Leo also has to do his best to not die without telling anyone about the dangerous life he is threading because of the system. Leo is a really fun character to follow because of his way with words and the role he is made to play in Terra Nova. The author has done a great job in world building while still mainly focusing on the characters which I really like. The characters seem real and I like that theres things happening that the characters just dont know about at first because just an all knowing character that has solutions to problems before they even start is sometimes boring. In this novel theres things that happen outside of the characters control so its fun seeing them solve problems or be clueless that there even is a problem. One time its happened is when Leo doesnt know he is being used for publicity by a specific organization while others think he is in cahoots with that organization. Or when he finds out about his mom and dad in trouble.This book is just honestly great and now im in trouble because everyday I have to check if its updated already.
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