though I don't know how to feel about our dear author wanting to be spit on, I do really like this story and hope more people can come and read it to, it's been an amazing read and forms an addictive craving for more
Hiya author, The book is lit. The system adventure is too great to describe well.
I love how MC is gonna create a world by his own. The power, struggle and journey aka adventure seems promising.
Highly recommended to the new authors and those who love adventure.
Free warriors ,go read this book. It is a lit.
A borrowing system where MC borrows, you know, and rises up from adversities.
It truly is a great premise and the storyline was rather awesome as well. I also stand by on your ideals as well— that the first chapters of the book should build around the character first before anything else.
Keep it up, author. This book shows great promise. I'm adding this to my library. ^-^ Cheers!
This writing is a great start into what looks to be a great book! I look forward to watching the characters develop and this new world take shape. [img=update] Can't wait for more chapters!
The book is all good but theirs some parts where it can get confusing and some places where u have to think about what's happening but all is good
i'll give this a shot!!!!!!!!.........................................because it looks interesting..................................................[img=recommend]
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The book is written so beautifully with strong vocabulary. It keeps you on edge. Author is very talented to write such an exceptionally good book.
Is this harem cuz i dont ouke harem? ?
I like what's going on with the setting presented in this story. The world is being shown to us via scenes and proper narration as instead of a giant info dump or in some cases, every aspect of the world being presented in the auxilary volume (like a guide).
This novel is a good example of how a world should be shown. It's okay if some parts of the world are being told to us, the reader, but it's best to let the rest of the setting be shown to the reader for painting the picture in their minds.
There's only two aspects of this novel I have an issue with: some paragraphs are quite big and massive, so it's best to cut them down especially for mobile readers. There's also the updating. I understand if the author has a lot going on other than writing this story, but if I may recommend, it's best to stockpile on google docs; write and edit the chapters, that way if you want to say, upload a chapter a day, it'll be easier.
Stories and their respective chapters take time, and you author, have the basis of a good story. I just hope your schedule is managed especially for the readers who have given your novel positive reviews.
Good luck.
Nice story plot.
Nice start up.
I really loved the way the horror came upfront.
But, I'd love if there was more suspense,and the chapters should be longer.
But, this novel is great.
I'm adding it to my collections.
It's too yummy to pass