Good novel, don't know why it have no rating.
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it's really an interesting story and I like how well developed world background is and also hope this story will not be dropped. hope the author will gave this story more of his time it really worth it
Love it please keep this one going! Everything is well written and easy to read and the plot is easy to get hooked on.
will the main character be building his own kingdom.
I really loved your story, For readers, I will say pick up the story it sure is fun. There is ample good character design of MC and the story development is cool. What else can I say other than its addictive!! you will love the story of Ghost & Gaya. GIVE IT A READ.
Good Job Author!!!
This novel sucks, the characters are bland the world development and skills are non-sense and the author is freaking creating other accounts so that his novel’s rating is high.
Excelente novela
The story is good
The mc is good
This novel give me vibe like kaguya manga
I hope this would get voted later on
Please try to read this novel
This is the first WN I’ve read on this app and I’ve read around 50 other WN’s inbetween this WN and the review (I used other sites to read WN’s until I actually made an account), so my memory might be a bit hazy in terms of story development and world background.
Writing Quality: 3.7/5
If I was the author I’d use a broader range of vocabulary, be more descriptive (quantity), and just have a detailed description (quality) if things like the surroundings, fights, etc.
Writing Stability: 5/5
Not much to say here, 7-8 chapters a week consistently which is very good imo.
Story Development: 3.2/5
Some plot holes here and there but nothing too major to the point where it’s detrimental to the story. It’s still too early to comment on this since this WN feels like it’ll easily be over 1000 chapters. I just hope the pace doesnt skyrocket out of nowhere and just becomes like your average cultivation novel right before the typical “holy continent” arc.
Character Design: 3.5/5
It’s an odd mix of some characters are bland, some have an alright design, and some feel like actual humans. The MC has some dumb things about his personality like being overly paranoid of the system and his sponser. This category was originally going to be a 2.5/5, but after reading the recent chapters it looks like the huge main female cast might finally be getting some character development, so I decided to bump it to a 3.5/5.
World Background: 3/5
From what I’ve read so far this has the potential to be a 5/5 if the author plans ahead carefully and doesn’t rush the rest of the story. In general, we haven’t been told that much about the world and beyond it, but it’s clear that the author has plans to talk about everything more in depth later on in the story.
This is my completely objective review so even though i gave it an overall rating of 3.6/5 that doesn’t mean that it wasn’t entertaining or that i didn’t enjoy it.
When VC reaches the 550 chapter mark I’ll update this review and make it way more detailed and in-depth, but until then the review stays as is. I hope everyone that reads this has a good day, cya
please please please please stop this bullshit and give this up so someone else can finish it. It's been more than five years since this started and for a story with only 1500 chapters you sure have taking your time dropping this whenever you wanted and letting it sit for months on end
The plot is really good . I usually avoid novels with 'goody two shoes' main character cuz that makes the whole plot sound like a kids' fairy tale . But our mc here is truly devilish and competent . His ways of dealing with his opponents excite me to no end . The only problem is the shitty translation . Mistakes regarding proverbs are quite rampant . I got confused with a lot of characters' respective genders . Other grammatical mistakes are also visible . It will be a great read if the quality of translations can be improved .[img=recommend]