Some chapter are in english and other in other language i don’t know can you make only English
Great Work! i hope author makes more of this!
Dropping this after 30 chapters.
While the setting and world is quite interesting and intriguing, the story so far is filled to the brim with plot holes, plot armor and forced plot.
Writing is barely the average on webnovel with a few errors every chapter.
Fun read. have its flaw but its ok so far. I hope its get better.
Looking forward to it...................
Great book 5 stars
Love it. It is amazing
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Okay so first off this is a combination story, so if you really want to understand everything going on you should also read the Futurani System that they made.
Secondly it has very few mistakes (Like maybe one or two every 10 chapters) and it is really interesting doing a proper balance between **** and storytelling. The only thing I can possibly suggest is having two endings one for each story part (where both win and lose) That way people can still enjoy their choice of favorite.
This is a story about a MC who wants to be a "King of Soldiers" but seems to know nothing about becoming a soldier. Everything about training to become a soldier seems to be surprising to the characters. If you know nothing about a soldiers training or have never read about the military you might enjoy this. It makes me think of a JP high school LN but it's a military academy instead. Not for me.
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Blown away!!!I love this storyHooked right from the synopsisThe storyline and the plot is just wow!!Can even picture it on a screenGreat job author
Hi... I'm kind of frustrated at the moment from reading all the comments. Even though they are not rude, it still hit me since I didn't meet the readers' expectations. And as for that, please forgive me. I will still produce the best quality I could offer.This review isn't about me showing or wanting some pity. I want to the readers know that even I can't be the best writer, I'll be the most understanding writer. I'm taking all of the suggestions and reading plenty of light novels if I have time to widen my horizon, thus, I just want people to understand my concerns.This novel isn't usually a type of fantasy novel that is common or a trope that is repetitively used in the platform. I took a risk to implement such a trope so hope you appreciate it even it's not in the best of you could expect.These all I felt is something I understand. Normally, you won't receive praises every time and criticism will try to hit your shortcomings. It's helpful, I know it, however, I still can't help but feel anxious every time I see a number in my inbox (you know what I'm saying).So, instead of blabbering about my sentiments, I want to let people know that I am still an amateur. I didn't have any training or so, that's why I am still in the process of improving my work. I do mistakes. It's pretty common to me since I'm not a native English speaker (even those who are native speakers still make mistakes as 'no one is perfect').What are my mistakes in this novel? Misused adjectives and adverbs. It's not common and at least you could stumble upon those funny mistakes like 2 out of 10 chapters and 3 in a thousand. But here's a reminder, pronouns are my weakness and sometimes I can't notice such mistakes. My language doesn't have pronouns for genders so hope you understand.Warning, incorrect spelling (but rare than legendary swords). I must let you know that my language doesn't have hard spellings as our words are spelled by how we speak them.Anyway, thank you for visiting and reading this review of mine. Last warning... Awkward structure but not all are grammatically incorrect.