priyankaraut
I really enjoy chapter eleven author please open chapter 12 I can't wait till I get another FP to read chapter 12 it's really good.On chapter 11 are they in Iraq or Syria?
it was soo amazing!! now i'm left wanting for more :(( I suddenly feel empty..well thank you author-san for your work and hope you keep us updated !!
I'm disappointed to see this one go, it was and had potential. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is a good story, but don't put your expectation too high. The story is fun, easy to read, and worth to read if you is charging your spirits stone for some other novelAnd lastly... Keep the good work, author.Selama tulisannya bagus, akan selalu ku ikuti ceritanya ?
Great work author, interesting plot and storyline, I really like Sanjay's character, and although I can't say much since the book is still in its early stage but I can tell it has great potential. so keep up the good work author.
Do writer get money is author of the novel get enough money.
This chapter is awesome! I love how detailed the scenes are explained by the author and it kept me on the edge of my seat with all the action happening around them. I was immersed to much in reading that this chapter felt too short for me and I am left wanting more. I'm looking forward to more updates!!!
Amazing the author turned my focus, really amazing the settings and the char they are all flabbergasting Good job to the author I am amazed keep it up
Well the idea of the story is good. But development of relationships in this novel is slow, so if you can handle the fact that mc the supposed s*x god after 50 chapters just get 2 Harem members then try this one, but dont worry author himself told us after this he will increase the speed of mc for gaining new harem members.
zzz sudden premium without noticealthough the story quite good but the response make it deserved only bad review------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I give it a 5 cause it sounds promising, I havent really read it yet but I will. And I hope my 5 wont change. I hope that the novel will be as interesting as the description. To the author please dont make every BIG organization and people with authority and power to be the MCs enemy. Please....
For the love of god and everything you believe or don't believe in: don't be foolishly swayed like I was by the water army who sings praises to this novel. It starts out decievingly well and has a good premise, and manages to go strong for a little while before brazely dropping the act and showing its true colors.Quick summary: mc is an incomprehensible moron who gets praised to highest heaven as the Supreme Genius Stragegist for having a half-decent/obvious plan once in a blue moon; as for the other 99,99% of the screentime he whiteknights around collecting bimbos in distress, getting his arse handed to him EVERY. SINGLE. TIME., only to be bailed out by unexplained coincidense / "awakened instincts" that are never mentioned again / enemies suddenly gaining a new set of chromosomes in exchange for half of their IQ / convenient moment of luckyness / deus ex machina (this time literally) / plot armor / a random loli that in a single second gains more power than mc ever had and finishes off a boss with a single lvl.1 fireball (yes, seriously).Have mercy on your nerve endings and spleen, just don't read it.
