priyankaraut
at first the delivery of the story kinda bad buat the idea of the story is really good. after reading more chapter i feel people can enjoy this story more. not too hard and not too lignt kind of novel. but author need to work on more little detail like world background and mc + artifact build. cant wait to read more...
This was such a great read! I really enjoyed the writing. I can’t believe there is a book & comic! I was disappointed when it all came to an end
Amazing it’s the first story were it feels like it could actually happen . Every part of it is feels real the story has allot of potential and the author is using it in a creative way And the more you read the more you see it’s uniqueness i am sure that any experienced reader will be happily surprised. If there is any changes I will updated the review in the comments
So far the novel is very good, some scenes funny, some involving discoveries. I can say that if the author doesn't give up, he has very high potential to be a good book
This novel is great in manny aspects, but if youcan't handle a immature/idiotic/retarded MC, I would steer away. I have read up to chapter 385, and the MC goes from actual development, and then suddenly all of it is lost, and you read about a retarded toddler, or a kindergardner who is close to being mentaly challanged. The main problem of this, is that we arereading about somone who is an *****, with experiance of war and blood and the harshness of the world, and at manny times throu the novel acknowlages this, ad actualy gives the illusion of maturing in increments. He goes from a mature responseble paragon for hes sect in the heat of the moment/some important times. To a dribbling gradeschooler with downs in about 0-100 in 0.001 sec flat. It is as if we are reading about two completly different people, and it only keeps on getting worse, he actualy becomes dumber in he's "moments" as the novel goes on. If you have problems reding about idiotic MC's who you doubt can even muster the intelligence to open a door, then this MC wil probably give you truble reading the novel.When it comes to world building, the world unfolds in a natural and even pace as cultivation levels or political things in the sect unfolds.
i finished all three books but this one will always be my favorite
Its a really interesting concept but, the execution is strange because it has too many things mixed together. He becomes a boss in his dreams. But in real life makes unboxing videos. So he gets things from the game and gets quests to make unboxing videos.
It was a consistently great novel until chapter 180 or so after the betrayal, where the mc totally lost his previous character, didn't get developed properly and everything turned into nonsense. This made me drop the novel after reading over 220 chapters since I couldn't follow what even was going on anymore.
This book is awesome, hopefully it keeps updating so I can read more of it but so far I can’t complain.
A level system novel with modern setting that’s not for those who have strong feelings about animal protection. A random chance allows MC to be equipped with a system that helps him transform into a fish and consume other fishes to level up, evolve and promote his skills/ gain new skills. I couldn’t get over the fact that the first thing he does is experiment with his own pet fishes from his fish tank. It’s somehow so...insensitive. He can use skills to change normal fish into rare fish. Later, of course, he goes out to buy fishes to consume, and has adventures raising money and selling the rare fishes he transformed. He has a girlfriend (but also has encounters with several beauties).
Miss your work I hope all is well
Everyone needs a woman like Helena in their life, someone that provides Solace (chapter 11)
