it is so amazing and well sketched out ❤️
Please keep the novel uppp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have been enjoying the book so far, unfortunately starting at chapter 61, the writing quality seems to have gotten a lot worse , hope in a few chapters it gets better again , will post a new review if it gets better !
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Finished reading the whole book. Will post points on each of the 5 Judging points.SPOILERS AHEAD***************************Writing Quality: Overall generally good. slight grammatical mistakes that are easily over looked. They are consistent errors so once you're able to know what word to substitute for the written one you're good. There are times when names are mixed up, but again, easy to figure out who is being talked about.Stability of Updates: Book is finished. Nuff said.Story Development: This one gets the lowest rating from me. The pacing is all opver the place, and some time skips are sudden and random with no warning given. Also, around chapter 170/207 the pacing takes such a HUGE leap. we go from this guys day to day, to suddenly we're rushing the ending, introducing new kingdoms and entire story lines, with only 30 chapters or less left. The first 100ish chapters had great pacing, and while there were issues with him doing things it's clearly stating he can't, it's good. But then he's suddenly one of the most powerful in the entire dimension? (trying to avoid giving direct spoilers) It feels like Author just got tired of his story and threw in the kitchen sink and everything else, wrapped it up with some random time travel and said good enough.Character Design: Zayne is very well designed. He's well fleshed out and easy to comprehend. The other characters Author takes the time to have him really interact with are also well designed.World Background: MC clearly has memory loss, and in the first half of the novel, Author really draws you in. He makes you want to learn more about this massive realm with the MC. And then he tosses it all down the drain at the end.OVERALL: Decent read. Not Authors best work. Possibly his worst. Rushed ending killed any excitement I had for the novel. Would recommend? No. Would recommend the Author for having a decent writing style? absolutely.
Love this novel I would prefer more drama on evil and benefit oriented mc type stuff
The latest chapters are honesltu disappointing, and Ling Xing Xue is a disappointment, Xiao tian accepted the fact she was married and even had a child and she broke up with him die to cheating which is understandable, but the fact she even goes on a date and is maybe going to devlop feelings for the mcs other identity is basically ntr, she is just a slut
I just Finish reading the whole novel nad it was ok. The reason being the ending still left a lot of things hanging. but granted the author did say in his fair well message that it was his way to end it completely while they could. Since it seem like author has health problem. So i really can't be to mad with the ending they did what they could do with the time a strength they have.
So the only thing i see wrong other then that the ending could have been better, is that the mc is to patriotic and belittles everyone else but then again it seems that this is a problem with Chinese novels they always seem to leave you hanging with the ending and have china as the best and Japan and the USA as the bad guys our as extremely petty.
Oh well you get use to it after reading several novels and learn to expect this narratives. So all in all a standard novel only the world background can be considered good.
Ok, I'm not a fan of romance, so this will be an objective review.
The quality of the writing is simple, neat, and easy to digest. There isn't much description but really it's not a bother. I actually like that, because I tend to imagine the scenes on my own.
The stability of updates... well nothing to say about that really.
Story development is cool. We start the book with SPOILER, the MC in a bed with his "wife" who is actually not really his wife. The author doesn't really linger on the useless and we dive rapidly into the nitty gritty.
Character Design: As far as I have read, it's all good. Nothing out of place and they seem to have their own personalities.
World Background: Humm I didn't read enough to really critic that. But from what I read it is developed and the author gave it some thoughts.
All in all, it is a good novel. Just not in my genre.
Keep up the good work!
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Love it keep it up. Hope the ex wife doesn't use the child to get back in the relationship other than that more updates I like where this is going so far
*Review copied from old version of this novel*
Absolutely loving the build up and background. The characters are cool and the directions the story is going, so far, feels right. Keep up the awesome work. The New World is exciting. Wish it was for real. Lol. Can't wait for more stuff soon.
The deserving ones out of the trial reads. I am only writing a review because this one has not been selected yet (as expected). I bet the super cliche god level upgradation system (whatever the name is) will be selected.
The description of the novel is actually a little deceptive. While the summary doesn't lie, it makes it look like the mc is dense and avoids cliche settings. The yellow, profound, earth and heaven level rewards seem nice but they actually require the mc to complete a very difficult mission to complete.
In a normal story, the mc would say opportunities are available in crises and select these options and somehow by luck and strength complete the mission successful. The mc has one problem: The World is targeting him. The mc doesn't have as simple as bad luck but the heavens conspiring against him. Without system, he would die in like 5 minutes into the world. What mc can do is use system to avoid crisis and develop quietly with the attributes. The plot has freshness, the characters are likeable and the writing quality remains decent. While it has its shortcomings, I won't mention them because any review reader will only remember them.
Tldr: Good book but on the verge of getting axed by popular cliche novels in trail read.