Writing Quality:
There are some grammatical errors and sentences that don't really make a whole lot of sense, but they don't hinder the understanding of the story. Plus, who doesn't have typeos?
Stability of Updates:
It's pretty stable, plus the idea to give out new chapters for powerstones is pretty ingenious if not time-consuming.
Story Development:
The story is great. Really great, although it can be predictable at times.
Character design and world design:
I love both. The characters are masterfully done and the world- although it was described in only a few sentences- is also good. I think that it's an ingenious idea.
Overall, it's a great book. Keep writing. :)
rly hope that this will be picked
love the mc
so far he seems to be normal, which is way better than most braindead mcs nowadays
it looks that this is going to be sweet romance between FL and mc
what else would you want?
go read this
Yay Ihis novel didn't have romance which is making me interesting in this novel. I liked comedy novel and game system. This summary sound interested. Looking forward to read this novel.
So far it's a good novel about doomsday.
Black hearted merchant indeed.
Simple...
1. Go to Another World...
2. Build an Internet Cafe
3. New customers sometimes underestimate MC shop
4. Customers amaze with the game.
5. Customers amaze with MC gaming skills.
6. Release new games, food, movies gradually.
7. Customers shock when trying the new food
9. Major event
9. Crowd amaze with MC skill-mastery from the game etc
0. Go to other region to open new branch Internet Cafe
Back to number 2
I read till c.430 and that was really what happen in this novel, I'm sorry to say this but GOAW has better plot than this... umm, its about internet cafe, so it can't be help (maybe)...
Well it depends on the reader themself, me personally fine with this novel but sometimes its gets boring...
I like it. At first I thought it was going to be a zero to hero in a minute, slapping everyone's faces, etc, etc, but no. The cheat given to the protagonist still requires him to work hard, especially hard. In additionally, he is actually paving a path in cultivation, which is a bit unusual to see, even with cheats. Pretty nice.
Really good has good plot with smart characters and the background Is not bad
I like this book. What about more chapters? That's the flow.
I'm just increasing my lvl dont mind me
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Just as I informed you at the other GINKEN, I want to remind everyone who is reading this book.
A newer, higher-quality version of GINKEN is available. It can be found on Webnovel with the working title GINKEN: Ember in the Storm.
Most people would consider the new edition to be a brand-new entry in the series. It follows a sequence of events and improves some of the awful quality. I would suggest giving anime a shot if you share my enthusiasm in it. (Note: The early arcs are really an embellishment; the story actually begins at Golden Wasakona.)
I appreciate the people who stand with me.
why did you stop mam