i don't know what to say this story is fuc"ing amazing keep it wish you all the best kkkkkkkkkkkeeeeeeeeeeeepppppppppp iiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttttt uuuuuuuuuuupppppppppp
Imagine you fall in love with a beautiful woman, you hang out with her on what you think are "dates". You proceed to have a "sleepover" with her. But as you get into bed with the sexy young lady who is in pajamas, she turns into a morbidly obese otaku who starts laughing at you. Elizabeth is a trap!
Another farming novel, but in a cultivation world this time. Naturally, this means we get everyone picking a fight with the MC for no reason, leaving all the conflict feeling rather artificial and unsatisfying. Also, it's just not very interesting or good.
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I love the character development, grammar, and spelling. I also love the fact that shin is a healer but am disappointed that he is slowly transforming into a cliche mc who is either a dual class or abandoning his healing for high combat power. Please understand, combat power isn't everything. I love shins uniqueness and that would disappear real fast if he continues this path. Every other wuxia novel has high combat power mcs, and they all become gods at the end. This novel has a chance to explore the political and social impacts of shin being a PURE healer, exploring the healing arts in greater depth and detail, as well as increasing its popularity by becoming a non cliche novel unlike every other novel. I admire your writing style, and if you are reading this I would like to tell you that your work is the best out of all the original novels I have read. Please don't let Shin's uniqueness disappear. It is the thing which sets him apart from other mc's who are all combat power hungry. let him become a pioneer, and make him a healer.
In the end the only reason im here was trying to search for touhou stuff but nope everything was a lie. Still r/lolice is dead, and Its been a few chapters and I don't understand anything. lets just give this 3 1/2 stars though cause that what the author rated.
Good work author I really like villain stories and this didn't disappoint very nice work I recommend it and author keep up the good work
hello Mr. author, I'm about to start reading this book of yours, and I want to know if there's any steamy moments coming anytime soon, with all of my regards
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It's gud and time. Killer one......................
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The first chap got me hooked and I couldn't stop reading. It's really a nice book here. But it would be nice if written to the third person and not first person. Written like this, you can only talk about scenes where the MC was at and not other places. I recommend to change or it would be complicated in the future. The grammar and vocabulary is fluent and the characters developments are so nice. Continue with the work and you shall be rewarded
The quality of the descriptions is amazing. The story telling is great and it keeps you looking forward to what's next. After looking over the fact that the chapters are longer than normal, its amazing read. So as long as you don't mind long chapters, this is a great read
amazing plot with many spoiled males