I like it, the start isn't the best but it gets better.......................................................................................
Loved this I’m obsessed!! 100/10 could not put down
keep doing what you are doing it's really appreciate keep up the good work
I came for the cover and stayed for the plot. I was looking for a novel that is similar to Koten-bu series(Hyouka). I am quite satisfied with the mc that isn't simp and hope author will keep up the good work.
honestly was quite dissapointed. first of all the villain tag doesn't fit to Mc at all. she is more like a anti-hero, the writing was good but had lots of errors like writing same name twice or writing wrong name. there is also no update on the dragon egg that was Layla contracted with, I expected at least some info about it Even if it's a little. as the author said there was no Yuri no harem and no romance from what I see until the chapter I read there was none of it which is good. But yeah, the villain tag doesn't fit this novel, perhaps because of my perspective but the maid feeling guilty over a child is pure bullshit in my eyes. that same maid that killed 3 previous miss/Mister of hers and a full blood demon which known for their cruelty. Anyways, in any case the story was good but the maid and the way of Mc thinking and acting ruined it. I couldn't find any explanation on the magic too, the Stat menu is not shown either. overall I'm giving 3.4 was good but ruined.
Looking forward to the journey of Rose between the realms
Its's time for a review.WQ:9/10 For this platform and genre, I will give a solid 10. It's almost perfect, but if chapters were a bit longer with more details it could've been even better.SD:8/10 Again, I understand that's not a authors's problem. If the book was completed, some filler chapters are a must, but waiting 3 days just to read chapters about random drama between MC and nameless solders is quite a torture. Otherwise the pacing is good, not too slow, not too fast.CD:7(9)/10 MC is not very smart and his character is sh*t. But it's logically sound, as MC is a teenager with limited experience and traumatic past, with great development potential. He thinks that's he is a great villain with cool plans. But in reality he is soso. It's shown that a some of the heroes are even worse than villains. So why go around saying you're are a villain if you can easily pretend to be a hero, if you are not stupid or lazy? It's good to want to rely on others, but you can maintain a good reputation, have additional strength and moreover the power path of the world is to become a god, so it's a good idea to have a fanbase. And he is too emotional and paranoid. Some emotions are good. Being paranoid is a must. But together? He just jump from one conclusion to another without thinking too much. He claims to be paranoid but still trust some random god and Wraith, he thinks he didn't trust them, but his actions says otherwise. If you paranoid just cook some thousands of plans and conterplans, damnit. As of now he has just some trust issues, decided to try trusting others, gambled, it's backfired and he throws a tantrum. I hope that will teach him true paranoia and he will start using his brain. For example with enough game points he could have bought a lie detector ability or some other ability to test Wraith, like divination etc.In fact I'm not a big fan of the evil MC's, but I'm okay if they are well written. As for now, the MC is just meh. He has no ambition other than survival. Wich is understandable, but I think it's time for some short-, middle- and longt-term goals. Selling dr*gs is a good short-term goal, but it will be nice to have more. Middle-term goals: we don't even know what his plans for Earth, if he became a paragon. Long-term: even thinking about what to do with Earth is quite early for MC, but you should tease us readers a little bit, no, author? So telling us some vague plans about future would be nice.Wraith. Absolutely hate her, but the dynamics between her and MC are quite entertaining. But it can easily ruin a story for me. For example I was waiting what MC will do with Wraith before writing this review, and it hits a sweet spot between entertaining and infuriating. So for now it's all good, but I have a feeling that if this development with Wraith will become forced or stupid I will drop this book. The stupid dude with stupid name, that could become a godking, is quite a good character. And it's a good writing, that he is so annoying, dude sacrificed everything for stupid, but heroic reasons and miserably failed. And even in death he left a heap of troublesome sh*t for others. It will be epic if he was playing some 4d chess and still alive while everyone thinks he is a st*pid waste.Other characters are ok, but with limited development potential, as MC is a loner with no friends/comrades, and as enemies they qualify only as temporary obstacles. So it will be great if MC can have an interesting and powerful mentor/or a qualified useful ally, as I can't see other scenarios were we can see great side characters. As for enemies, I think MC has enough)US:10/10WB:9/10 It's great and a major reason to read this book. There are a few things that can be improved. A tower system is interesting, but after war arc it's a bit useless, if you want to become stronger just risk your life and go to more worlds, so I think there are should be more insensitive to clear a tower. Oh, about war arc. It's the worst arc so far. While it's a great introduction, it's lacks freedom of action. What the point of telling us about missions if all MC's missions were boring and he didn't make use of his abilities, like he can be a perfect spy or recruiter? What the point of forming alliances for war when command centre will decide everything for you anyway? Hoping that this arc was just a foundation for other more exiting war arcs.Although, it's cool that MC uses his numerous abilities to fight above his level or groups of people, but it will be quite boring if all his enemies are limited to only one ability. Hoping that one ability will be more broad and versatile as you become stronger or MC will eventually fight more wellrounded aliens.Overall a good story with a few small problems, but great potential.
Not like other urban novels where the MC wastes his time on earth trying to get revenge on the family he has a grudge in the legal way and just goes on a quick killing spree which is nice. Other than the whole Disciple being typed as discipline there arent any typos which is nice
the story and world building is amazing. please post more chapters. do not give up.
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Then the rest of that day Ian pouted and flat out ignored Blacky as he sits in the corner crying as he hold the torn book in his hand.
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