Royal Road for Retiree

One of the best novels I read so far

The grammar is just... PERFECT. Plus there were no confusing moment as everything is paced really well. This could be a potential starlet you should add to your collection

Concept is good but when mixed with a purposefuly dense or stupid mc it completely ruined the flow.?                                      

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unsatisfying. I've now read 250 chapters and while i really want to like this i just don't. the last 150 chapters left me in a perpetual state of annoyance. we have a very cool set up, the first 100 chapters are well written some pacing issues but nothing deal breaking. The mc keeps getting into impossible situation which means he gets absolutely trashed, he does manage to make it out alive but you never really get this satisfying pay off, additional there's no real rest between one catastrophic desaster and the next. As a consequence it often feels like the mc is power less and even in situations where we could get some satisfying comeuppance like with the scamming information merchant we just move on. another peeve i have is that at some point MCs brain goes afk and we have to deal with the consequences for the next 100 chapters. all in all very unsatisfying but sadly not bad enough for me to put away immediately causing me to waste too much time...p.s if you want to read a story with these flaws but on crack give stygian diviner a go you'll hate it

"No... No... Stop! Stop!" Carmi shouted under Kyler's embrace after she came back to her senses. She could not do something like this... so outrageous! She will give herself to him after their wedding.