good story.. characters are very expressive FL is very intelligent
"The rules are simple. Each Guild will each have 100 points that will be distributed to its members; how you will distribute it will be up to you. The main goal of each Guild is to take as much points from any opposing Guild as much as possible. Now that everything is set, I wish you all the best!"
As expected of Aoki, this book is another masterpiece! I 100% would recommend it to anyone looking for a new book to binge!Keep up the good work!
Finally back, I thought you dropped the novel, came back better in every aspect, keep it going!!now gotta fill with random words, good novel tho ;)
nice good product. nice start to this type of story
It’s so juicy and the parts are perfect plz continue I’m loving itttttt soooooooo much GGGGGGGGGGGGGGgGGGGGgGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGgGGGGGGGGGGGGGgGGgGGGGgGgGGGGGGGGgGgGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
liked the novel very much and just want to say that please do not bring in soldiers from a portal by using the system to make an army like some novels with systems do for the mc and update regularly
Refreshing and very emotionally charged. I am looking forward to see how he wakes up and gains control of the world!! Additionally I love how Aleyria is so filial to her dad. Plus she is so powerful!!
Novel idea is rather good, an enjoyable read. I'm pretty much a fan and I hope you're able to update more each day. Like the others, some grammatical here and there but it seems like your first work. Good job! I hope your writing skills improve throughout the story!
to all those who are still on the fence thinking if they should start with this novel or not, trust me give it a go. With just 4 chaps you will be hooked. The story has alot of potential to cross atleast 500 chaps with the beautiful world building and the best part is that the author is not rushing the story or making the MC too op right off the bat. The MC is op but not like crazy world destroying at 5 years of age op. Regarding the MC not acting as a demon lord, what do you expect, MC was a demon lord in this previous life but that dosent mean he has to be a ruthless bloodthirsty killer that kills everyone within sight. Author if you can just concentrate on he human continent ark for some time and then venture into the other continents, it will be an awesome novel. Thanks for your efforts, i very much enjoying it.
Sucker for these stories! It was quite a nice and enjoyable read. Hmm. How can I help? I humbly suggest that the author use Grammarly app to further improve tiny grammar and capitalization missed. Please keep it up May the author write more, edit more, enjoy more, learn more, and maybe earn more soon!
Love love love this book. I cant wait for more chapters. Guys you should really read this. Its has so many twist and turns but its really amazing so far.