Read till chapter 2 so far, and I can already tell the story is great! It's very entertaining since the writing quality is very good. A few error in tense but it's almost invisible to notice since it goes with the flow when it comes to reading. I also liked the fact that the author isn't aiming to win WSA, but rather to share his fantasy story to the world. So keep it up author you're doing great! And best of luck too??
Amazing poetry, deep thinking... amazing. Although I was a little lost at first, I found my way back a few chapters later. Still, it's something I would not be able to put together. Keep it up!
I was about to read it but a lot of people in review be like there is NTR which i don't enjoy... And i don't see the author clarifying anything so i guess there really is.. so all the 5 star i see here are from people who enjoy NTR danm people have some weird fetishes out here.
Everything just kept me looking forward to what is next. Starting from the title itself. All I can say is the storyline Is great and believe this is going to be a great one in time to come. Keeping going author ??? I'm waiting for more updates from you
In today's episode, an interesting story and plot are overwhelmed by bad grammar. Really bad. As in "I'm fairly sure English isn't a first language for either the writer or the editor" bad. Now I only made it to chapter 4, but that's all I'm willing to slog through.
This will be an indepth review from me so stop if you don't want spoilers for first 15 chapters or so.......The world - It's interesting with the abyss and layers and I hope to see the author explore it more as more times goes on in the story. Maybe even come up with unique climatic conditions etc.Grammer - Decent enough but with all I've read, it's a major inprovement. I didn't come to WN expecting perfect grammar and I didn't get it for most part. That being said, this is passable enough for me to not give up just from the grammer alone. It's rather fluid.Characters - They're interesting but many of them were introduced and were saved for later. who knows when that later might come or whether they'll be explored again or not. (I hope they do since the author takes notes to include them in their other story and the side-story is interesting )That being said, there is a little issue with the pacing being all over the place for me but nothing major. I like this story and would recommend you to check out the first few chapters to see if it's your cup of tea.
Did Author just dropped the book???I mean, he tells us not to read it in the description. Then, why should I bother to even look inside?????????????????????????????????
Bruh all that for fried Chicken I approve and hopIng for a 2nd Book!!!!!!!!'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????????????????
An excellent continuation of the TAP story with an emphasis on the Exodus platform and the Guns and Gore game tantalizingly mentioned in the original storyline.
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Shhhh... I dont want to ruin the storyyyy☺ Hope you all will enjoy the story as much as I am. I got so hooked i love the story development and the art it so beautiful.?
the story is very good.I just want the novel to progress a little faster.