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I thought this book like a Perfect World game which is a venomancer class??? in which mc transmigrated ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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I really wanted to like this novel... Novels about blacksmithing are my favorite.But i couldn't, i had to stop at chapter 17...The crafting chapters are perfect, it shows that the author cared and researched a lot about it.But the character interactions are so stupid and irrational that makes my head hurt.I really try to ignore all of that but omg i can't.Some situations are so stupid and forced that feel this story is written by a kid.I meant no disrespect, but this had to be said..
not bad not good just a normal novel and translation goes bad at 40 with some name changes but you'll get used to it after 200 chapters or so, overall the novel goes on a slow steady pace towards the end with some repetition and stuff no betrayals no young masters mcs talent only known to friends and some characters in storm guild, with things and characters forgotten, also the mc does get married at the end and yea
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Average xianxia with OP/Special MC and splattering of face-slapping. Synopsis might mislead towards a low-key MC, who quietly accumulates power till he becomes top power - in the story MC quickly shows his power, becomes heir of the sect, no. 1 of new generation.There is no in-sect plotting, there are no young masters to offend, with elders following. While there is lots of killing, it isn't "you looked me wrong, I kill you" type. MC doesn't joins the cliche outer/inner sect, so no low-level fighting of that kind.A decent enough read.
The novel's got a pretty good concept and I'm finding it quite a read so far. The only thing weird about it is the names of places and culture it's depicting around the area MC lives in but that's just my personal opinion. Great piece of work and looking forward to more updates from author!
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Anyway... i like it so far. Not that hard to read and the way the world works is quite open and easy to understand so you don’t have to actively try and remember things.The pet system reminds me of “Long Live Summons” so they probably got some serious inspiration their.The only downside for me is that I nor the MC have a real clue on how his “Golden Finger” Works. So this slows down the MC (i think).Pretty good so far.
There are grammatical mistakes here and there but its not something that you halt you from reading. From the first chapter, its intriguing and eye catching. There is a lot of mystery to uncover from the beginning that leaves you desperate to find out. I am very interested to see the growth of both the story and the author's writing ability!!!
I also really enjoy the Setup and hope, that you can keep up the good work. It has a really unique worldbuilding and a good amount of Slice of Live which I enjoy. The Action has also a nice timing, so that you don't get bored and just thinking about what he will build next is keeping me tense.