TheHoader007
This review was done based on a webnovel event
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Really liked the descriptions and the way the writing depicts each detail very clearly, helps in imagining the world and the characters way more clearly, love it.
I am going to be honest. The plot is both unique and enjoyable. So is how the characters are introduced. The world building is also acceptable; it is generic medieval fantasy. But the writing is truly shit. I know you are contracted and want the money, so you do not have time or intention of going back and editing the earlier parts, but just as paying workers properly and providing them with rest increased production and efficiency in your story, editing those earlier parts will multiply your revenue.
It is a well-executed FPS and I honestly like the characters. Though it only has 10 chapters, there has been a decent amount of progress. Want more action. Can't wait for more updates. ?
So I do like it, but honestly I just don't understand what is happening, maybe I didn't pay attention but I'm around chapter 35 and I've completely lost track of what's happening
Are u okay???Did u really know what your doing??Your making me sick..For the sake of the badge...My ghadd..Im really sorry..I just cant help it..You reviewed others work as one star..CONGRATULATIONS!!!!you ping my interest...Then im done..Sorry again for my ranting?
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10/10 I want to spank Murakami in the as* now, lol......Peace out mate, i'm just kiddingDefinitely worth to read, very very good i'd say, lolFellow Authors are awesome people
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Awesome Story!!! I was hooked from the beginning and it keeps on getting better and better as the story progresses. The classroom was scene was very relatable. Keep it up and best of luck to the author.
there is nothing good about this novel. its boring, a cardboard cutout of whats already been done before but there is a twist, he gets two rewards per check in, one for each bloodline. which makes of course no difference, like one reward through check in wasn't already op enough.i'll give it two stars. for those that have never read a check in system novel before, this might be a great story to read.
