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After my consent bothering our favourite author replyed me (face slapping system is coming back with more face slapping scenes to entertain us so lets continue to support our author
I was loving it but the writing has become super weird. They're using adjectives and adverbs in like a 4:1 ratio with nouns and verbs. it's super throwing my vibes while reading, it's almost impossible to engage with the story at this point. first 700 or 800 chapters were really good. I assume author is burning out.
Here is my second book. I wrote this for fun and also for you guys to enjoy. By the way if you have suggestions, then you are free to give some. Thanks and have fun.
Quite good
chapter368 to be continued,?! ???
Very interesting story hard to walk away from it.
The book is well written.
good read. keep them coming
waiting for the next chapter
males bacanya.. sedikit2 banget uploadnya..
Amazing! Cant wait for the Gamma’s book! ...
BeUtiful stories, where is the rest of the chapters
