I've read upto chapter 39 and this are my views so far.1. Great world buildup, the whole ancient technology turned vr is really good and the back intime thing too.2. The mc's buildup is a little underwhleming considering he was one of the most powerful players is hard to believe given his choice in equipment and skills. 3. A good rpg gamer knows that although active skills are important, passive skills are a great boon especially in early and late stages, but so far with his low mp he ends up choosing all the active skills with really no passive boosts, at least mp regen skill or mana potions or something.4. Before he died the mc used quite a few skills. Then you said that they could use skills in the real world. but then his mother gets into an accident and instead of using the skills from the game he decides money matters first, with the possible case of amnesia or even memory loss don't you think the mystical power of the skills would do better than modern medical means, also if they need certain conditions or lvls to use skills in real life you should have specified them early on.5. Now the last, mc has a cheat weapon, it can gain lvls by 'devouring' other equipment, but instead of feeding every equipment you sell most why? since devouring basically any equipment gives it exp then super grind of equipment should have been the way to go. And the mc's constant fear of using better equipment is unfounded in my opinion.But anyway this are all purely my opinion and views and you are the writer and you can do anything you want, but im just laying it out there so that maybe it will help in your endeavours.
A decent cheat novel overall. It isn't very original and as usual it isn't something you haven't seen before but despite this (and the rather rough start) the novel's execution is fairly enjoyable. A respectable light hearted read for when you just want to kill time. It does what it set out to do fairly well. 2.5/5.
While I star rated this a 4 I think the quality of the story is at best 3.5. The story starts off with a mortal with immense cultivation potential living on a world where cultivation is almost impossible. A master from the Divine Plane comes down to his world and watches over him for 400 years and gives him a cultivation technique that can be used to refine his body by killing others. After 400 years the main character is almost dead a second master comes and the two master pity him being born on a low plane.The masters use their cultivation resources and together send him to a world where he can cultivate and use a forbidden technique to reverse his age to 12. The masters also impart numerous divine techniques and items that will allow him to easily cultivate to the Divine Plane and meet them again.Now on to my thoughts of the story. Overall, the story is interesting as you follow his path to get stronger while avoiding cliches. But, the story has many drawbacks that may disinterest you from reading further into the story. 1. Lack of dialogue: dialogue is scarce in the novel and on many occasions this has left the main character and the people he interacts with have no special characteristics or development. 2. Romance: This is a harem novel and up to chapter 151 so far he has 4 partners and a 5th one is hinted as one of his masters has a granddaughter we will meet in the future. Nothing wrong right? The problem lies in the authors complete avoidance of romantic development that makes you care about his wives . They are just thrown together without any explanation an old you are left to fill in the blanks. Also, as said previously, the lack of dialogue leaves all intamancy for you to make up on your own. (Notice: sex scenes are kept at 1-2 sentences so keep your pants on)3: After the first few chapter with an introduction that left me thinking that the story would be a 1 in 100 novel I was met with disappointment. While unique in it's own right, the writing style is boring and without life. It follows the same pattern for every chapter.(This happened--->how it happened--->why it happened---->random long info dumo---->mc reaction)4: fight scenes aren't well described and are anti-climactic5:There is no perspective of the main character so we have no way to connect with him and have a deeper enjoyment. And the format is monotone and systematic. (It gets boring after a bit)Now that I have put that out, if you are still with me, I will say the highlights of the story. The thing that kept me with this and is keeping me here is the world building. I'd you make it through the explanations and other things, you'll find yourself with a well described system of cultivation and profound understanding of the worlds he visits and how The different planes, creatures, and factions interact. It is easy to understand his power level compared to others and what drives the factions and people he meets to do what they do.Whether this story will interest you is up to you to decide. I think that as long as you preserver through the first 30 or so chapters you will enjoy the story more and come to like it.Thank you for reading this review!!!!!???
I don't often actively try to rate novels, thinking that they will eventually come around and later released, however this novel is quite outstanding compared to all the others I have read. It has all the aspects of a non-repeatable adventure; you get the feeling that everything is fantastically realistic, an MC who thinks carefully before he acts, but is not too cautious: capable of even doing the craziest things that will help him survive (although he doesn't do anything that goes against he moral principles)The world building is also quite extraordinary, nothing is alike and everything is very fun to read about. The author reveals and conceals all the necessary details so as to keep the reader engaged.Overall it is a great pick to read with an amazing writing and translation quality.???
I'm currently reading it at mtlnovel. Mysterious noble beast. No faceslap. No arrogant young master. Good comedy. = PerfectionHe can copy skills and paste it on his pets depending if it is compatible. Not invincible but still OP
Well i enjoyed reading this peaceful story.Well i enjoyed reading this peaceful story.Well i enjoyed reading this peaceful story.Well i enjoyed reading this peaceful story.Will be waiting for more.
except for some parts l really appreciate good stories like this one. l hope that it continues to the very end,.................................
Reading this was horrid. Just past the paywall (which is only 6 chapters deep btw) which it is a tough chliched 6 chapters, he sets up a horrid scenario with no thought behind it where a girl has to pay 50k (which they cant afford) or be r'd. disgusting. on top of that, the mc bails them out in exchange for sleeping with them and then tries to play the moral high ground. Written poorly, from a vile author.
Ever wanted your heart's desire? Power, fame, wealth? What would you do to achieve all of that - even trading your life away?Make a deal with the devil, the Trafford Trading Club but your wish might not be exactly what you wish for... Great novel, intriguing, mysterious with an underlying sense of moral reasoning and lessons. A novel with much depth into human emotions, society, reasoning and the dark and good side of humanityGood translation as well, it isn't easy to convey the same message in another language. Thanks for the great reading!
The story in itself is not the great deal but, in my opinion ,the world is well build and the characters and their interaction seems quit real( for a r-18 novel),with a good writing quality(compared with most of the novels of this genre), so if you are an OPEN MIND person that just want to enjoy a good r-18 novel, I, sincerely recommend this novel.
i very glad that I could read this great novel thank you. I wish you will continue uploading new chapters
I rate my novel low because I know for myself I need a lot of improvements regarding the structure of the sentences. But like that being said I want you guys to support it thanks a lot!