a shotty copy and paste novel that really sucks nuts. so if I were you I'd find something eligible to read cause this story destroyed 66% of my 3 braincells.
So far I am having a great time reading this story and honestly hate waiting for the updates.*sigh* I wish some of these fan-fics have over 200 chapters sometimes, but anyways the story is good so far and I like the characters, especially the MC. The story development is going good, and I have no complaints.. (except for the updates . . . . .)
The character is a depiction of a real indian family and the whole infamily foghting feels exactly,can relate to a huge degree,The background is so great ,its real,update is good, I love it and recommend whoever is reading this to atleast read ten chapters before you write a bad review
A hell of a nice novel HONESTLY + Mc has iq+ worldly developed without mc+ other char have some story and background+ no writing errors+ good grasp of timing and+ no over narrative theme
Why wasn't this novel picked up? It's a breath of fresh air, and actually written very very nicely. I highly recommend it if you like unique and solid world building and fun characters that are fleshed out.
Overall not bad. I read up to 54 but I'll be dropping it. It seems like it's a copy of Tales of Demons and Gods story in similar cultivation, MC, the world being only a little part of the whole thing, and dark spirit guys. Also please look into getting an editor or someone to clean up spelling errors, grammar, and fixing the overall flow.
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more more more more moreplz conrinue the story where can i vote for it ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
The story is pretty good I like the plot of the story some really good stuff I think the writer is very talented and has a very good imagination.
Hello all, this is just my personal bias review for this new work. I had found that the VR Game genre could use a little bit more twists, and an added fantasy element to spice things up a bit as we have so many of the other ones around. I am doing this for fun, and also the Spirity Award Contest, and based on the results shown here I'll determine whether to push the series further, it will be a long story with a deep plot, very interesting character with their own back story and goals, along with a secret treasure as they main goal for all who chases their desires. Please do enjoy, and if you love it, support with a review of your own :)
One of the most well written LITRPGs among original works! Characters are fleshed out, and world building is steady. The MC is not much of a talker and he has the tendency to act first, think later, causing lots of hilarious situations to happen. Definitely worth a read!
don't usually rate because I am lazy. but this novel is way to under represented that I just had too... one of my favorite starts I am currently watching. Hope you keep the good work up.