Good storyShitty translator Needs to be replaced to bring back quality and regularity or just support piracy cuz this crap aint worth paying if they simply increase price without increasing quality and quantity
An excellent premise marred by a terrible cast. A more generic MC would do this story a world of good. Instead, our MC complains constantly, is his little sister's whipping boy, and even after he outpaces her, is still manipulated by her and mildly poisoned for her amusement over pretty revenge. The author constantly treats this sister as the upcoming female lead. The best character is the sister's rival, who gets next to no time in the story other than to show the sister's tsundere desire for her brother. The sister is abusive, manipulative and petty. Her only redeeming qualities are her physical looks, which are common as sand on a beach in this genre for a female lead. The father and mother are quick only to believe their daughter over their son, who was historically honest with them and gave no reason to believe her over him. The story in the picket dimension is good and a solid 4 star story, but the rest of the cast and time outside the pocket dimension is miserable, or corny at best. The translation quality is acceptable, but for native English readers has some major speed bumps that make it feel like a machine translation. The grammar and word choice can be rough from chapter to chapter. This set of errors is so common that the comments have made it a reader meme. Overall, I do not suggest this story. The free chapters are okay to bad, and the paid ones are more of the same. Spend your passes and coins elsewhere!
I don't know why this novel is dropped from the vote. But if i think again, it is natural to be dropped since the novel storyline is not worth appreciaton. I lost a lot of coin for this novel.?u200d♂️?u200d♂️?u200d♂️?u200d♂️?u200d♂️
The story is so unrealistic that meat pies falling down the sky everyday literally. Thats what this story is all about. Mc no money. Boom! extinct fish from nowhere for sale. Mc poor health. Boom! Fishing rod hook onto cultivation manual. Mc needs sugar daddy. Boom! Billionaire passby his moutain. Mc restaurant no ingredient. Boom! Comes out once a day from an old well. Mc restuarant on some rural moutain for one meal four pax portion only still need to walk to top, cost price random, food type random, opening hour random anyhow when mc is happy. Shi.t this is not a story. This a dude winning lottery x999 everyday.
The Smiling, Proud Wanderer is a Wuxia novel by Jin Yong (Louis Cha). It was first serialized in Hong Kong in the newspaper Ming Pao from 20 April 1967 to 12 October 1969.Alternative Names:• Laughing in the Wind• State of Divinity• The Peerless Gallant Errant• The Proud and Gallant Wanderer• Xiao Ao Jiang Hu• 笑傲江湖Translators:• Lanny Lin (Chapter 1 - 21)• HHaung (Chapter 21)• Pokit (Chapter 21 onwards)• Bliss (Chapter 30 and 31)Editor:• HHaung (Chapter 21 onwards)The reason I'm putting up this novel is so I can read it for personal use. I watched the State of Divinity (1996 TV series) and loved that show. I knew there was a Novel of it but never spent the time to look for it until now. Was reading it online but the chapters very LONG and I keep loosing track of where I left off so I came here. Reading it off Webnovel is so much easier especially since it keeps track of where you left off. Unfortunately Webnovel has a 20k word / 100k character limit for each chapter so I had no choice but to chop up the chapters into parts.For those who also want to read this feel free. I am not taking someone else's work and passing them off as my own, full credit is given to the original writer, translators and editor as listed in the descriptions, plus the content of this novel is free online in multiple sources for everyone to read. So putting this up on Webnovel is just for my own convenience sake and anyone else who wishes to read this
I like this adaptation of Naruto it's very interesting and cool I also like Sasuke being jealous
I really liked it how it begins but Bro you make no sense and i really can't get myself to read more .You basically waste all his points and literally everything he has on his gf and wait a minuite isn't she already as strong as Saint 9 -_- -_-.Sorry but this really pisses me off and i really don't get myself to read it with his gf.The first thing she does after they met in the new world is ....nothing.He gave her all this and she just stands ther like it is natural that he does this for her and it pisses me off how he is so weak compared to his gf and lrt's look back.He has 7 wishes and his gf is basically on top of the world from the start and he is like a bug /ant and it would all have been okay if she would be more thankful but she isn't he sents 1 million from 5 million of his points for stones she can use and she doen't even says anything and just stsrts to cultivate ??????OK i stop writing because i would just get worse .The idea is really great and i would love to read this story if either ...1. His gf doesn't exits.2. She is much more thankful to him.3. You don't make her as strong as she is from the beginning but either the MC should
Great novel! It reminds me Assassins C lassroom, however, darker. I like it. I wish MC was more wit. He seems a little bit lazy to solve mysteries. But in overall is's great novel :)
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Anna deserves a happy ending. I hope she gets that, Author, she has already gone through a lot
Wow!!! it is perfect!!
Amazing story, loved it, loved it, loved it... Definately worth reading again.