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Well this is an interesting book to say.Writing quality is a bit mess at the initial chapters that's to say, and the author seems to improve his skills and that what a reader should expect from him, as not all are professionals and they are learning and not all have english as their first language to begin with.Stability of the update was poor as our author took a break before but right now it seems good and I hope author could continue the same pace. Caught up with the ch58 you know, cliffs are the things I hate, plz update next ?Story development is interesting, can't guess Mc'S character, some times a cool killer, while other times a helping saint.Character design, this is a thing which was a tough thing to discern, as it was equally good at some point, and irritating as other, but still it's a good one compared to the new novels released In our webnovel.World back ground, still waiting excitedly to see what author is going to unfold, guess it's exiting to see where the story will end but at this point it's going well like some traditional cultivation novels to there's nothing to fred on. Over all its a worth reading book! Hope author could release a bunch of bonuses, some times and entertain us readers!Let the study have 300+ chapters and make it a great hit!And thanks for author to keep writing the novel without abandoning it despite he had once to take a long break before re continuing???????????
Its a great novel with a great character development slow and steady. No rush or something with a detailed plot , in the end its a novel worth reading....
Here is my thought about this novel:Worldbuilding: So far what I read is quite interesting about talking about the games and some mechanics that will be very fascinating to watch in future events:Character: So far the character is fine especially Max and the design is somehow quite diverse. I also hope we can see furthermore about Max character in future events and the side charactersOverall, this novel have a great potential and that's all I have to say. Thank you and keep up the good work!!
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Author here to let the new readers understand what to expect:1)Basic info about the MC: With bad luck following him everywhere, he had no choice but to develop a rather carefree attitude, of course, this was also due to the trust in his skills.NO, this isn't a harem :/ :/ :/2)I'm definitely learning and getting better everyday. The style in the first 3-4 chapters may seem a bit all over the place.I would ask you to stick around and give it a try regardless.3)The novel may seem fast-paced but that's only due to the world of Genesis being extremely vast.4)Of course, since this is my first time doing this, it's natural I make mistakes but I go through the work multiple times before posting it so if there's still any mistake, it'll only be minor grammatical errors.(which isn't excusable but it's better than story-line errors)Thank you for reading and Bad luck FTW!
Very interesting. I am intrigued in the sibling relationship and the MC's goals. I want to see what kind of plot the author has laid out.Writing Quality: I can see the quality of the writing and that you try very hard to edit. There is still small grammar errors, but overall content was prestine. I do have a pet peave for authors who tell action words, instead of showing the action. (Example: Sigh, *cough cough)Story Development: The pace of the story is perfect for this kind of genre.Character Design: I can see Zuifan's personality vividly. Just wondering if Chunu will have a big role because she seems invisible to me. Perhaps give her more descriptions. World Background: Good world building. So far the book is slowly explaining itself.
Camping for a change in translator!! Support my review if you agree, guys!! Let's help each other in this. I've waited for like 4 months and all I get is 6 chapters? Wth man.
Another transmigration novel with different settings and spices. Instead being OP at the beginning, MC have to struggle and punished before he can taste the fruit of his efforts to cultivate the golden citizens he 'fooled'.
decided to give it a chance, after reaching about 206 chs i knew that this novel was just hopeless....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................