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Nice book it's too much nice book I recommend this book it's nice book let's read it by enjoying the mystery and the ghost I highly recommend this book it's very nice
Well , I was not at all interested when I first saw this book , it didn't have cover but the story was awesome so far , you should read it , it's very interesting
Fun story with likable characters. I'm already afraid of outsiders meddling messing up the balance between the MC and the AI. I can see that ending in terrible disaster. Hurry and get James a body asap Kaz! I just found it and read all available chapters at once so I don't know what the update schedule is like.
My God..this story is amazing. I know my review is long but please read it as I give a basic summary of every subject. I truly believe that this is the best of the current trial reads.My review also contains spoilers, rather than checking the mark for spoilers, I left it open because I know a lot of people will completely ignore a real review if they believe it has to many spoilers. The spoilers included only mention the changes in World Background compared to our Real Earth. I mentioned these spoilers because I believe they are one of the main selling points of this novel and will likely be a reason people choose to read or not.I’ve literally never given a review for a trial read because the good ones are either the last to come out or never come out at all. Translation Quality: Translation quality is perfect as far as I can tell. I’m not exactly an English major but I’ve read plenty of books and the grammar seems fine as well.Stability Updating: Obviously I can’t rate stability updating because it’s a trial read with a limit of 60 chapters until it’s voted through.Story Development: The background plot has already been partially explained as far as Chapter 13. The World’s advancements have all been set forth by a mysterious system. I’ll further explain this in world background. Everything seems fine so far and there hasn’t been any plot holes and everything has been explained in ways that actually make sense. Historic moments are explained in a paranormal sense that keeps you interested. The system is not introduced until certain things occur and there are restrictions on who receives the system and why it exist.Character Development: The MC is an eccentric genius and the author has developed him literally perfectly. The MC goes beyond your usual “smart MC”, though he acts quite weird at times, it’s explained that because he is so weird, he has learned many things with his higher than normal intelligence. If you read the first chapter you’ll completely understand what I mean, his actions and words in the first chapter alone; do well to show off his characteristics and personality. Other than the MC, not many people have been mentioned as far as Chapter 13 but those that were; were shown quite well. By that I mean they all had clear stories and they don’t give you the usual feel of a random side character that’ll be thrown away later. World Background: The story seems to be set in current time Earth. Everything has some odd twist set forth by the system I mentioned in Story Development. It’s explained that all evolutionary advancements have been set forth by the system as of now. The system sets forth “games” called “Killing Fields”. In this games, the system chooses either a large scale or small scale field depending on the current advancements of the world. It chooses its initial players for specific reasons that haven’t been completely stated but seem reasonable. Human evolution is an aspect created by the system. Many races have gone extinct due to punishment from the system when it finds the game to not be helping the race advance. Dinosaurs are one of the races punished by the system. Humans while not extinct, have also been punished by the system. All of this explained as real moments in history with a paranormal twist. Again, please vote for this story when it comes time, I truly believe it’s the best of the current trial reads.
The writing stile isn't for everyone but I like it. I have a friend who I recommended a story with a similar writing stile and they told me they don't like it so I'm sad I can't talk about it with them or recommend this one because they wouldn't get through it. Those who don't like the writing stile, it's just sad that you're restricted by your opinion and can't enjoy this story. Anyway I think this story is fun to read and the characters have little quirks that make it that much more enjoyable for me. The author shows some of who they are in the way they write and I plan to read all of what they write.
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The use of swords is common in fantasy books.What about the ax?I'm a Viking person! Beards, muscular arms and axes! I don't drink alcoholic beverages. But in wartime, I get drunk with blood! Men must use an ax! Do not show your weak sword in front of me or you will incur the wrath of my axe!
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I am liking this story. it is the first light novel that i have read of this kind. i cant wait to read more chapter of this amazing author. i hope that she keep up the good work .
Interesting. That's it nothing more, nothing less. And curse this 140 character requirement. %%ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
I love all your novels. You are a legend. You have great description skills, great character portrayal, and amazing plots. Keep up the good work.
Very interesting. Clan building, smart MC, good side characters. Best novel this week by far. Hopefully this one gets picked. . . . . . . .
