Very disappointing First volume is okay but second volume was bad with nonsense competition after competition especially after chapter 140 it is outright trash as It seems to have to written by ai chat bot.
The story looks good, but there are a lot of repeating words and terms. You might want to look for synonyms or try using different subjects for repeats. As for the world-building and character-building, I got lost in it, due to it being complicated and a 'data-dump' for lack of a better word. Might want to spread out the info and better explain it. But overall good :)
this novel has been stuck at the 300 chapters range for like 4 years, the author is lazy and dont finnish his novels/ .>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
This novel startet Awesome but then it whent to ****.but still you can read it till chap 159 then drop it, because then the Mc gets the fucking great Idea to turn all his gilrs in Futas.I mean were the MC himself one (Futa) then it where a diferent Story but the Mc here is male so FUCKING IN HELL NO JUST NO!!!!!
the story was cool, but the author managed to **** her at unbelievable levels, the guy managed to make mc harem turn futas, good guy not only gave up this story as I advise everyone not read you will regret, except who likes mc being ****ed by futas
It is really nice that this MC doesn't have plot armour, is extremely evil because he chooses to abandon his humanity and at the end of the story we see him evolve from a mortal to a real god
This novel can be considered as a diamond in a rough, but still needs polishing to truly stand out there.Grammar is improving at every chapter which is good, story/plot execution is between good and bad "depending on the reader's taste". I would suggest for the author to rewrite/revise old chapters with wrong spelling, grammar and loopholes when he/she has time.Overall, it's a recommended read. Has a lot of potential and the only issue I really see is like I wrote above, execution of certain scenarios.P.S. I'm still annoyed by random reviews that is only meant to bump the ratings, hopefully there's an option to erase those as the tend to give novels a bad first impression.
Tch foolish mortals, what's wrong with 16 chapters with no cultivation thing? It's just sixteen, ah!Our Little Che from Against The Gods doesn't even start cultivating for more than 50 chapters and hes still doing just fine. No rush...
Seems readable now. I remember it was quite different when I came across this last week. A good change at least. The story's interesting. Gone are obnoxious young lads! Looking forward for future chapters.
The synopsis, tags and name of the novel don't add up with chapter 2 and forward.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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So This Novel Will Not Picked Up?Its no more in the TRIAL READ nor in VOTING .????????????????????????????????????????????