Boring wish fulfillment / Harem nonsense. I’ll write a bit more since they require a certain number of characters to review. Main character is boring. Random women blah blah blah. “Quotation marks get mistranslated”
story is straight forward , I hope to see more chapters along the way.
I am currently enjoying the story, but i hope the author will write longer chapters.
loved the part where everyone died again, and again, and againanyways when is he killing the sun?
Nice......................................
The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.
I trust to see the outcome but before that, I want to recommend this book to you. The writer has done great work and if you are a fan of supernatural creatures or horror, you will enjoy reading this book...
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i don't whether these are fake reviews or not but No.this is definitely not a 5 star book.there are alot of mistakes in grammar. the first few chapters made me not want to read it anymore;spoiler alert I mean seriously?!the MC gets kidnapped by a mafia leader then adopts him as his father?Goes on ONE date then tells the girl I love you?shows off like a noob to her father that he is a mage alchemist etc.. i mean why? you could hid some, just being a mge is enough why show off lolthis is clearly a bad novel.
This is my review of the first fifty chapters:1.The novel begins with auxiliary chapters and I recommend reading it before starting to read the novel.2.The construction of the novel is more than wonderful, with simple errors from the author that you will not notice much ... The main character starts pathetic and I can say that if he does not have the plot armour, he will not live more than 20 chapters.3.It is easy to notice the naivety of the main character in all the events of the first fifty chapters of the novel from following the evil maid who destroyed his village or following her orders even if he had a chance to escape ... not accepting the fact that his father abandoned him to save his life and the life of his mother, or that his maid is just a spy To a hostile kingdom ... or when he decided to submit to the family of the assassins who originally caused all his suffering and the fact that he apologized for causing the murder of the female assassin who kidnapped him almost made me decide to leave the novel.4.Even now I can ignore all the mistakes that he did because of his ignorance or his weakness ... But when he was forced to become an assassin from the same hostile kingdom that destroyed his village and is the main cause of all his suffering and all he did is train and train and train only because he was ordered to do, This became extremely absurd.5.Here what bothers me is the way he treats the people who trained him ... First they are enemies so he is not supposed to befriend them, But if we ignore this point, we can talk about his treatment of his trainer (the only person who cared about him), Although she did not want to treat him harshly or train him intensely because she could not bear to see a child suffering like this, he was treating her coldly and without an appreciation for her concern, Even when he decided to try to stop her from risking her life to save him from execution, all that came in his mind was insulting her and hurting her feelings so that she would stop caring for him.6.One of the things that surprised me was the fact that he never used his mind even once during the first fifty chapters.7.Just so as not to misunderstand me ... the author wrote a wonderful novel and the main character's flaws are intended to illustrate his future growth and the difference between his way of thinking before and after the turning point.8. The main character's turning point or what I hope would be his turning point is Chapter 50 in which he realizes how narrow-minded an idiot he was in making his decisions, I know very well that there is more than one point that should be much better to count as his turning point in the first fifty chapters, but this is what happened so bear with his naivety until then.9.Mr.author made a good novel so everyone who reads this review just has a try. Read it and you will love what you find.10.My advice to the author: Try to change the name of the novel because the current name is not attractive at all.Again thanks for your hard work Mr.author, you did a great job.
until now the story has been good the mc is quite likable and although he is a super op character it does not affect the story much overall if u wondering if you should give it a try. try it you'll like it
The story is good and has potential. Also has good grammar and pacing. The mc is likable and also other characters. The storyline is starting to get interesting! Good luck!