Honestly the concept of the novel is unique and great it my opinion but lacks quality to make it shine. the Grammer is atrocious for the novel making it hard to find much value in the plot and flow when it feels unpolished.The interactions between characters are great but they don't flow well back and forth, this can be attributed with the bad grammar but it feels that at some points in the conversation they stop discussing a certain topic, jump to another one the come back to the original topic. it's hard to notice at times but a second read through and you'll pick up on it.I understand this is the Authors first Novel and they are learning through the development of the novel. I just hope they can come back to the early chapters and edit it as well as not include flags of Brazil or America randomly in the novel.
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Amazing novel Arthur keep it up but we need update always so please always update it for us please...............................................
its a another disappointment. another addition to trash. till chap 56, it goes great. but in chap 57 he accept back the family with 3 conditions which amount to nothing. it was when the the previous owner was killed and mc replaced him. he doesn't even has familial ties. atleast should have eradicated the branch which bullied him him along with elders and youngsters. i feel sick cuz his kindness personality only caters the strong and is forgotten for the weak. Also he has the cultivation to reach the peak tier wheres the strongest his father side is 4th tier grandmaster and his mothers side 6th tier king. sigh hugely disappointed. pathetic is was i call this.
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I am a big fan of modern military vs fantasy military. But it’s in short supply these days. So, the premise of this novel is very exciting to me. And the dialouge has that feel of proper military training. When I first read the chapter, I was a little worried about why you would choose Iran. Then I remembered that there are supposed “Stargates” ruins in Iran as well as Iraq. So, it would be the perfect explaination for the transmigration into another world. Keep it up.
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First I love the cover!The story reminds me of Six of Crows. I like Ander. I think this is going to be a very complicated story, but it’ interesting! Just a few grammatical mistakes, but otherwise awesome story so far!
It's not bad, but the MC doesn't really struggle. Every. At all. The story is just composed of the MC hunting, mostly unopposed, while wacky stuff happens in the background. Needless to say, I lost interest fairly quickly.
I like it . .
it says completed when its not at all.....it says completed when its not at all.....it says completed when its not at all.....it says completed when its not at all.....