If you have read many Cultivation novels and fantasy novels and know about their concepts like great dao, heavenly dao, elemental superpowers, magic etc, you will find out that this novel is a low end version of the mixture of those two concepts. As I found the following path of magic in the name of cultivation, every one has elemental efinity and they can manipulate these elements and this manipulation is represented by a cultivation technique, so in short it is a world of magic and weapons, not exactly a cultivation world where people cultivate to become immortal by comprehending great dao. Which disappointed a little as the scale of this world is quite low compared to genuine Cultivation novels as they take place at a multiverse level. This novel is also leen toward the slice of life with some actions and it mainly focuses on romance, romantic moments, harem etc. There are small and big plots like MC having an Artifact which has separate space and time but it is not explained how their mobile phone signal works in that space if neither space nor time is the same, are human tech so advanced this is not a sifi, right? But despite some negative points, i appreciate this novel which is actually enjoyable especially to me as action in this novel is okiesh although not best but ok, story process and world background are pretty too and I like it's harem members they are good (for me) as in other dual cultivation novels many of MC's women are Promiscuous and I am quite uncomfortable with that, don't get me wrong i am not virgin obsessed (maybe i am) but I am not obsessive for s*uts either. I feel uncomfortable if a heroine is too Promiscuous, think about it as a heroine cultivated with dual cultivation and she has slept with thousands of men seeing her no matter how tolerant I am i will feel uncomfortable. These are my personal opinions no need to judge, read yourself.
Boring wish fulfilment novel. Cant really get into it. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The book is basically about face smacking and I definitely won’t regret reading itSo just read if you like face smacking books
well lets start reading mtl i'm in chapter 344 it really starts looking like nonsense............................ .......................
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I really like the story so far and I'm on chapter 33 I believe. the only knock I have is the inconsistent updates otherwise it's a beautifully written story thus far. If you are looking for something that is not complete hogwash and a Mary Sue MC give it a try. It is a beautiful story because it is subtle and simplistic yet very profound.
Really good book, got me hooked.Sadly, there are so many mistakes in this text, sometimes I have to read a sentence multiple times just to understand the meaning... Please get yourself an editor!I do like your style however.
Alright... The first chapter caught me off guard with a full explanation of ranks and leveling system. However, it's helpful as well since I can just go back in the first chapter to recall what rank it is on the ladder. Anyway, beast souls or concepts related to people using the powers of the beasts always remind me of Heavenly Jewel Exchange. It's a good read.Please continue writing more.
First of all! I've read ton's of supernatural books and I can recognize a good book of this genre and this is one of them! I loved it's synopsis because it's really exciting ! This is not a cliché story for sure and it's character introduction is also Great! I highly recommend this! Great job Author!
This story has interesting concepts but, the grammar is really atrocious. There are other stories on this site that are even worse then this, however, I'm not going to be nice because of this. I understand that some people keep saying in the comments that the writing quality gets better at ch 18 or around ch 32. In the end I could not drag my self across the floor to reach such chapters.One of the main points I don't understand about the author is why if he has an editor already, just ask him to redo all your previous chapters. The author is dragging away potential readers due to not editing his starting chapters.Point 2. I feel like I'm reading a children's book due to all the sound effects. These sound effects take away from a story unless a child is reading them because most children don't know what most stuff sound like. That is why most children's books have the cow goes "moo" or the sheep goes "baa". It gives kids a 3 in 1 training. Training their vocals, reading comprehension and their understanding of what stuff sounds like.Point 2b. As an ***** with the understanding of the English language and sounds. I feel offended when I see a written sound effect. I know what a sword sound makes when it hits something with different densities. It just irks me because its like the author is saying "This is what it sound like to me and you should believe me." No... I don't believe sirens go "siren...siren" or swords go "slice" like their talking. Even the sound effects are off putting.Point 3: The cultivation is strange. I understand that being Original in concept is what authors should do. However, the cultivation with the steam punk vib (engine) and cultivation just don't mix well. I like the part about the soul-bonding, but, it could have been better executed.Point 4: The animals are puppets as far as I can tell. The start of the novel it shows the personality of the creatures and that was a good start, however, right as the soul binding was completed It was like the creatures them selves don't have their own thoughts anymore. It is more along the line as the people turn them into puppets then project their emotions into their soul-bonded puppet to be more like the host.Point 5: The MC does not have a solid goal. Yes, he wants to be in that championship thing but that does not make him insane about doing the most efficient cultivation training which most people fail at. The reason I do not believe this is due to the fact he lived a very normal life with his family. No sane person would tarnish such a thing. If the story showed he had a desire to be recognized due to certain bad pasts then I would believe it more.There are other points I could point out. But I don't know if the author can even read English so adding anymore would just be a waste of time for me and the reader of this wall of text.
Incredible series! I can’t get enough of
would like to see more chapters.