I like the concept of an MMA fighter's reincarnation, who is already trained in combat, can't wait for more chapters.
Wonderful! It's nicely paced, the writing flows well. I love how the first three chapters conveyed this sense of motherly love for Malaki from his mother. It was absolutely well written. So immersive that you can feel a bit of sympathy for a fictional character. Lovely!
wow, very beautiful writing, if they were more sensory details it would be amazing. Any revenge story fan, this is a most reasonable ??
gonna have to wait a few months because daily updates is just torture
I like the concept, but the story progression is not really that addictive. I have lost my interest in reading it after only tens of chapters. I believe the character's personalities and world building could be worked on a bit more.
MC be like: .
I came here because of the nice pic, but I stayed because of the interesting story. The story is simply at the start chapter 3, but it has intrigued me. It was actually able to pull me away from continuing writing my own novels. P.S don't tell my readers I was here. Just taking a breather with this nice story. :)
Fantastic! This book is immersive, interesting, and intelligently planned. I think this is one of the best cultivation book around.
Super system!!! Amazing concept to readout. The story will hopefully help readers to strive for their life to get satisfaction! Looking forward to get more.
Rebirth -✔Apocaly**e -✔ It's really interesting story. Not so typical teenage or younger versions rebirth. More mature and smell what older guys here so yep it's a interesting story with nice organization and development.. so keep your work.. it's really good. ❤
Here is my honest review XDThe story telling is amazing and im loving the wacky ideas. The plot seems to progress nicely and the character development seems steady and well paced.There are a few grammar mistakes in terms of tenses and word choice but those are passable. If you need deeper information just message me.I love the story so far and am looking forward to reading more.(At the time of this review only 9 chapters had been published)
Captivating synopsis that gives you enough info to keep wondering what this novel's going to deliver. Great worldbuilding obviously. The world is told through Elior's eyes which in itself was natural. Nothing felt rushed, but this was also not a slow burned novel by any means. Think of it as being in the middle, giving you the reader a chance to know what this world is like.Characters are well established and solid, each having their own identity in early chapters. Can't wait to see how they develop even further. Elior himself is a breath of fresh air when we're talking protagonists, different from the other protagonists of books I've read on this site. Sure he's got things going on, but he faces them regardless. A balanced out character if you may based on the chapters I've read so far. This novel has a lot of things going on; comedy, mystery, action, adventure, as well as system and a dash of seriousness, that Elior has something to fight for. Recommended for anyone who's a fan of one of the novel tags, or all of them.