Interesting read✅No grammatical errors.✅The main MC is great.✅The story looks really interesting.✅Looking forward for more chapters. ❤️ Keep up the good work ?
finally it's here. :)
Hi. I liked the author's other work, Martial God Space, somewhat at least.I am giving a generous rating of 4+ stars in advance, hard to tell with just 60 chapters.I will probably update my ratings when there are more chapters out.
Apart from the simulation part, the novel is mediocre. The interactions are bland and it's not that fun. The simulation part and different situations are really interesting though.
Author! Please tell me what happened to Lynn and Yang ning, I'm going into a deep depression here.... Will they meet yun lintian again????????????????
Say hello to the one who...Hello!!Are we going to review this?Yes, we are!!Can we just give it 5-star and left?No!!But we just did...LOL!!
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First off want to say that the idea behind this novel is amazing and I love the concept but when the original novel is not based in the United States at all and they suddenly start translating everything to be in America with American names losing the original flare it had. I’m getting annoyed it is very obvious that this was a novel planned and set in Asia could be China Japan or South Korea or maybe even North Korea but it is extremely obvious that this novel has Nothing to do with America. Please web novel stop trying to appease the English readers you have and keep the stories as their original it makes it betTer that waY
Another amazing story, was excited to see a different approach to cultivation, and MC power, mc actually felt like he was reacting at problems like a normal person would handle it, was a nice touch. everyone assumes the mc should always be the best etc, but we are still human and I love how his actions effect him and those around him, keep it up author and I hope you'll pick up this book again, cause every story you right deserves an ending, even if you think no one loves your books, the few like me truly appreciates the work you put into your stories and how you try to make them unique and great. Thank you for all the hard work you do
No slam donkeys and no pay-pigging, that cracked me up. I also like the do this or die situation even though it's the most common thing out there. This one was an exception. Seduce or die. This is a good book and has potential.Now I leave my jojo pose.
8 parts romance 2 parts story.Story started off really well, but eventually turned into a novel where MC turns out to be a flirtatious Alpha who can't keep it in his pants.MC joins the army but unlike what you'd expect, the new recruit is given an unlimited amount of freedom to do whatever he wants. It doesn't feel like the army at all and instead feels like a summer camp for teens with pent up hormones. Every new recruit in the army is thinking about hooking up with each other. There's no regulations at all.Up until the first new planet the story is pretty good. MC finds his soulmate and everything seems like as long as they can stay together everything will work out one way or another. Author does find a way to tear them apart though and what does MC do first once they're apart? Find another girl. The rebound was insanely fast. After that girl, he gets another girl, and once he drops that girl he gets another. This is all while comparing the new girls to the first one that he's still in love with. It's just a complete mess. The excuse was that he has his own urges and is really just looking for someone to satisfy them. It really doesn't help that every attractive girl he comes across instantly falls for him. I dropped around chapter 400 since it wasn't going anywhere else.