I'm currently around chapter 40, and so far I have really enjoyed the book. HOWEVER, there is one thing that has been bugging me ever since chapter 1.. the writing style.While I am extremely happy that there aren't many grammatical mistakes (almost none to be honest, which is rare), the author uses far too many simple sentences that it feels like reading a 1st grader's book."Isaac likes to sing.he enjoys it.Sophia, on the other hand, doesn't.Alice likes her elder brother."Of course, the content of the above example is made up, however, the sentence structure is identical to the story. The author needs to stop having 1 line paragraphs and minimise the use of simple sentences
The ONLY ONE BOOKS OF ALL Erotic stories.king of everyone. I would recommend this to everyone. Just ejaculated from 3-4 Chapters. Really good work author love ya. Seeing further great from you. Add more and perverter content.. Yess we are king of Fluffy fluffy flufi especially. Fluffiness Ohh Yeah ...
yeah yeah i know ... this novel deserves more than 3 star but if you have read Trafford's Trading Club then you will realize that this novel is just a cheap imitation of it with some chapter not making anysense at all
will it affect my reading if i dont finish the yin-yang harmony system? because i connect the dot when claire and she mention mike so i assume that claire is injured in the yin-yang harmony system
does the protagonist say he follows the path of evil? compare him and the mc of reverend insanity or wmw.this novel has absolutely nothing creative and innovative, it is like reading any other novel. the author just added a little '' sex '', '' evil '' and some bs, to create an illusion that this novel is different from the others. this protagonist is by no means intelligent and rational, he does not seem to think what can happen in the future because of his decisions and any treasure, skill ... it is all luck. another very irritating situation is the fact that if an enemy is a woman, there will probably be several situations where the protagonist will start to have some feeling for her. although she previously tried to kill him or capture him, everything in the end seems to be irrelevant because she is a woman.
A very poor ending to a relatively good story builtup. Only consistent activity is spraying/coughing mouthful of blood. Different ****ty looks in eyes like eyes with killing intent, cold eyes, eyes with desire to battle, eyes with aura of death and rot, ancient eyes, eyes with laughter, eyes with terror, horror, fudge... If everything was to be shown by eyes then why to talk. Author would give lot of powers to mc and then forget about them after few chapters so much so that the final battle was a bragging competition. A ****ty romance in which many unparalleled beauties are introduced but the least beautiful who has hardly spoken 10 sentences throughout the novel becomes the heroine. Author started well but then had no clue as what to write. Last book of this novel became a burden. MC is portrayed as righteous person who wipes out existence of someone only because he tried to catch a ball. Total stupid plot and basically an advertisement of authors other novels. Huge thumbs down.
in fact，the synopsis of original is just a poem：魔前一扣三千年，回首凡尘不做仙here is general meaning：Now that everbody think i'm a devil，i'm going to beseech the devil，after thousands of years，i look back at the ordinary world，i will not be an angel，I am willing to be the enemy of the world for you，my love.
Good, good, good!For heaven's sake translate it already damn. Almost a year waiting for updates.Favorite work by IET after Coiling dragon.
Thank god ISSTH completed before this sh***y war between QI and ww , still i am reading novels from both sites, chinese authors are great creators of imaginative world. If QI going to monopolise all the chinese novels and then putting paypal for reading novels, then i have to stop this amazing journey in chinese novels because i cant afford it. But i hope this doesn't happen.....
Read about ten chapters. It's a decent waste of time but if you have absolutely anything else to do, it's probably better.Initially, I was most interested in this novel.Big, imposing mechas and mech pilots in a cultivation world? A bunch of supporting characters to use those Mechs? Them betraying him only to have their newfound power taken away when they lose their mech? Sounds interesting!But no. First, the translator seems to think the plural of Mech is Meches. Which just looks stupid.Secondly, once reading the description of the Mechs, you will realize they're actually androids! It's a completely different concept entirely! Instead of powering up weak supporting characters, he instead pulls shallow and obedient NPCs out of thin air to do his bidding.The story seems pretty shallow. Every pretty woman has died and the MC assumes they are bad. There was no actual investigation done, or questioning. He goes straight into murdering people without a question, from day one, and seems like a pretty rough person.So if you want to see a man, alone, building up an army of androids with shallow personalities, written by a translator who doesn't seem to care, based off of an author's writing I suspect was really equally as bad, go ahead.Just don't expect anything crazy, and you can't be disappointed.
Finally a different type of novel, this time the mc has a wife and a child so no heaven toppling country destroying beauty that suddenly falls inlove with a dirt poor kid from a countryside thanks to a system then gets another 10 beauties. okay im done ranting hoping this would get picked.
It's a wish fulfilment novel. Idk if it's with the translators or what but I can't bear to read it for too long. my brain cells can't accept this level of stroke. If this ever get picked, please fix it.