This is another reason why there should be no civil war. The Sky Marshal wanted to gain political support in order to gain more power for the war. It would be funny, Ironic and a bit of karmic just if instead that our character gains the public and political support to the point that he is the unquestioned leader of the Federation. If we have a civil war then there will still be doubts. The treacherous Sky Marshal is literally giving us power on a silver plate.
oh finally an elf Mc with harem amazing ????
Here I thought I had already written a review. I mean, even if I did, I'd not have much to say. This novel is just the best, period. The writing, the characters, their interactions are all so amazing and intriguing that it keeps drawing you in in. Well, and there's the father who left for milk... Although as of now, the stability of updates is a bit questionable, I'm willing to forgive the author for that. Overall, just an amazing novel.
Continuo gostando da história.Recomendo que assistam, garanti que não iram se arrepender.Espero que não apareça dunada uma jovem senhorita da seita mimada para atrapalhar a jornada de cultivo do MC
its not good.mc is :passivnaiv weak (despite having high stats)acts and thinks like a Woman( He was Male...)lets Other ppl disrespect her way to many TimesStory is slow Voyeur no common sense stats dont Matter since the start uselessacts like a dense protag and thinks like one.
This is a great novel with a magnificent storyline.Just sadly he got hurt so the updating is iffy1qqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqwqq
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This is my unbiased view and is probably really pessimistic as my cynical cold hearted bastard side that is not tied down with useless things such as love will review it but here goes.The first few chapters will probably be just readable as the wording is awkward and doesn’t flow this is it is the authors first time writing and hadn’t gotten a natural style it improves as it goes along.Stability of updates is questionable in the authors defense he does value real life over writing since I’m not getting paid but that’s besides the point it may take awhile but unless clearly stated chapters will come.World building is what the author likes to think as learning with the view point. it’s vague but slowly grows as the protagonist excperiences things.Story development is a journey there is a main “goal” So to speak but it is generally over shadow by immediate concerns and desires that lead to said goal. Character development is hit and miss since this is the authors first published novel.Character design is in the wind so to speak whilst the author tries his best and thinks he gets his idea of the character across the truth is he struggles with the proper wording for the human anatomy especially faces.And that concludes my un biased thoughts on this brain child whilst I may be blinded by love for this pice of work I am not arrogant enough to claim it has no faults so please read and enjoy my novel and if you do see faults point them out as I will strive to Improve.
Hi, I like your novel, keep enthusiastic about updating your novel, and also make more detailed words from your novel, that's all my advice, thank you
it's an really good book, I think the story is kinda new, the power system too.the character and backgrbackground story at really good and it's nice to read an book with different perspective.it's an good read
Nice read so far. The writing quality is good, the world background and power system seems pretty solid also, the only shortcoming I think is the problem of the system reveal. I'm gonna believe the author though, I believe that the reveal will be epic, I recommend this guys. Also, please don't drop the book author.
ughhhh where did all the chapters go? i cant find them anywhere and what is going to happen now since the chapters disappearedi was reading the story and when i went to go the next chapter it said oops its broken.