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The cryptic undertone makes the story interesting. But I have to agree, translation from Chinese fantasy to English makes it much more challenging. Overall a good book to pick up! Hope future chapters gets better!!! To be honest, I saw the harem coming from a mile away
Funniest Xianxia/LitH parody I’ve read. I hope to find read more novels like this.
The author constantly changes the name of characters and then changes them back with no explanation like a character by the name of Le Feng the author calls them Yue sometimes with no explanation or when talking about a bear the MC is hunting they have called it a Iron Armed Bear and a Iron Brown Bear. Which one is correct? No way to know.
First i thought its just a copy, but past the 1 chapter its getting better and better because it has a good intrique and the opponents have reasons too find trouble . Its no masterpice but among all sign in novels its one of the best.
The story was great. It moved at a steady pace and the characters were cool. Unfortunately the author has stopped updating, so no matter how good it is, it's rather useless if the story isn't being updated.
The world and characters in this story seem to be pretty well put together and the novel regularly updates. However, I am really conflicted on whether or not I like this story or will even continue to read it. Nothing has happened, nothing of note anyways. From the very start until chapter 31, which I am currently on, nothing interesting has happened at all. The name of this novel might as well be “A Mage Goes to School” because that’s all that has happened so far. I don’t mean cool fantasy combat type schools either, no.... the main character went to a school and he learned math and some magic theory and then he got a desk job. Realistic, sure, interesting.... hardly. Besides that, there are the typical grammar and spelling errors found on Qidian. I’ll give this novel until chapter 50 to pick up the story, if not I will just drop it.
The power is interesting.So i read it.The only - is that mc is too slow.Like really slow, buti hope it change later.................................
One of the better original game novels here. Mc gets 2nd chance in life as he takes over jung man from modern world that has virtual reality games. As he had hectic assain life his last life in fantasy like world he now wants more normal life. So he starts his virtual reality game where he is op because its similar to his last life.Now the good part is that this novel has some original ideas and not very big plot holes as of now. Also its mc friends character designs are not bad. As latelly I have droped novels as I could not stomach mc friends (who are so anoying that no sane man would take them as friends).There are still 2 things that are bit anoying: 1. Mc goes with the flow too easily even if he only wants to be crafter, 2. Now mc who should be clueless about games often seems smarter about games than profecional famers who he interacts.So lets wait and sea how tgis novel develops. It could end up one of the better game novels or flop no idea right now.Author please add cover to the novel. Even simple white page with novel name and authors name is ok.
Great story! eagerly waiting for the story to be completed. love the characters and their roles can't wait for the end. Thumbs up to the writer!!!!
Please continue this novel!!! I really like the story development which is way better than most of the novel I've read and I really hope you can continue it.
Hey Peeps, Author Here! As I conclude Volume One, I thought I should explain a few things. First, I will be moving to Daily Updates. My chapters run on the longer side, so only one chapter a day for now. This novel doesn’t fly through plot like some others, but if you like well-developed storylines, vivid imagery and action, and high-quality writing, this is the story for you! I have the entire storyline mapped out, and MC will always be moving toward that final epic climax.Though it includes all the fun gamer story tropes, one thing that makes this novel different is the weaving of world mythologies throughout the storyline. From weapons to mobs to game maps, real mythical or legendary elements come into play. I also include some historical or mythical context in the Author Notes from time to time, if that kind of thing interests you!I try to balance action and deep or dark elements with humor, so it’s the kind of story that is both gritty and giggle-inducing. There will not be a harem; MC falls fast and hard for a badass FL, though there will be other female characters in general (SAO-style). The romance will be similar to SAO, in that it exists and is fun and leads to its own misadventures and social awkwardness, but it’s not what moves the plot.I hope you enjoy Humanity Online: World Sanctuary!
