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I was shocked to see nefertari meeting prince yali... you have explained clearly how much prince ramses loves nefertari dear author... I hope this is all just a conspiracy and the prince wouldn't take any rash actions against his queen... One suggestion break your long paragraphs into small ones. vocabulary is good
Like the plot! The author hooked me in the first chapter, it was written-well. This book is realistic fiction and I knew this book wouldn't fail other readers, it would suprise them even. A good book is when the author knows how to write the emotion that could connect to their readers.
leonardo and ava chemistry is interesting. the way novelist present it is ?????????????????????????????????
We're going on this little journey with Marco and I can't wait to see where it leads .I'm really curious about Ayesha and him as well, that's going to be interesting .I'm really enjoying reading this book.The way the author describes everything makes it really easy for me to envision it all.I generally love learning random stuff so I'm also enjoying the little words and meanings at the end of most chapters .I've got high hopes for the story so good luck to you
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Boring . Idiot mc.
Its not even funny anymore how much pedo this novel is, only going for children 10-16 yrs old exclusively
It’s a great story.
your novel is not perfect, but I did not say I don't like it, harem, the battle not bad.your grammar is same as me, the wrong spelling same. Out of all not perfect, but I'll keep it.
Still begining of the story, but from the background story i know it will be interesting. But, i think it is still too many chapter just for the intro. but it is still interesting.........
what happened to you bro? ? why no update? did something bad happened?