All the Naruto's squinted, glaring at his teammate's red Sharingan eyes with disgust. "Those eyes upset me."
pretty good. It's the time skip that I appreciate the most. Stories happen through the club anyway. That's why time skips are essential to keep the league as alive as possible. We know that MC trains a lot, but we see more of his social side. I think it is a good choice, it keeps the novel alive. Please keep writing.
the story line is good and it's.flowinf with less exaggeration
This will be part of my list for best books on Webnovel
It's good, easy to understand. I'll wait for a few more chapters
Really great book on my top 5 for sure, the only thing I would say I dont love is the pacing of the story, first I thought his cultivation speed was to slow, but then I realized that what was really slow was the time, I mean after 400 chapters or so only 1 year passed and countless events that made an empact on the universe happened, the universe being billions of years If I was the ruler of that universe I would think something terribly wrong is going on, In my humble opinion I think a time skip would make this story feel more ”realistic” and with a better flow.When I read the first 50 chapters or so it felt like years passed but in reality it hasnt even been a week since he got the system.Keep it up author
To an experienced authors, I want some advice for creating a novel. How many word counts do I have to achieve in each chapter? Do I have to start in building my characters growth? Advice in having better world building development? Something like that. This is a respectful request, I want to create my own novel that both of us can enjoy.I am creating as a way for my passion to be a writer and what's better than to ask you guys. I am thankful for your kind thoughts in answering my concerns. Hope you have a good day fellow readers and authors.
very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very good story
It has a lot of potential but the author keep repeating those nonsense arguments about humanity , I have nothing to do ,I want to die, just making the story very boring there is no positive character development ,if he want to become tyrant then become one don't try to be soft it's just make it more disgusting
One of my favorite genres ☺️. I won't give a five star rating 'cause we don't have chapter 5 and more to read ?Can you please upload more and don't leave us in the dark for ever? ☹️. It fits the real genre - thriller! Yay! ?
Great novel from a starter. Its going to be a hit if the chapters are made longer. Going from the chapters i have read, the book goes all the way to explain life of a young man who lost everything but i guess he's going to overcome it and live better. Just like all other american driven life. This story is gonna be a buster for sure.
A Mob Character Surrounded by Main Characters Wants to be an MC is an amazing and fantastic book! Although, it may seem cliché, it gives a new, different feeling while reading it! It has so many elements, you'll never get bored. This book is action-packed, but it still relates to us on a personal level. Some chapters may be weird, but that's what makes it special! 10/10 book!! EVERYONE SHOULD READ IT!