It's is quite a solid monster reincarnation with quite a good backgroundPlus my favorite class necromancer The story Is written well with good Grammer. Thanks for hardworkGood luck in your further works
Really love this book so far! ❤ I love how the MCs personality is written, it's rare that a book has my favorite kind of MC. I also love the foreshadowing of the worlds, I think I know where it's leading & if I'm right it'll be awesome lolI read another review that asked if it was dropped & you replied to say no, the book was just moving to a different platform. The reviewer asked what platform but you didn't reply. I understand that sharing what platform you're moving to on this one may seem a bit disrespectful but I & I'm sure others REALLY want to know what platform you're moving this novel to so we can keep reading! I already searched Google & didn't find anything! Please keep writing this epic story & let us know where to keep reading it! =^.^=
When I started reading, I would like to say it looked promising, but it didn't. (Things like dying in 2 hits or some crap even though he is a famed player, legendary set and the other guy has 11 pieces, says the attack can go through any defense and still gets blocked.) My biggest problem with this story is the inconsistencies. The author contradicts himself at the very least six times per chapter, and in the middle of doing so makes up new rules after he already explained the rules of what he was talking about. 'This potion has a 1% chance of success.' A couple of paragraphs down 'Because the heart and brain is smashed in, this potion has a 50% chance of success!' The author says the npc's are smart, which when he meets one for the first time they seem like actual humans, then 30 seconds later you can't think of them as anything but npc's because they turn brain dead and act on set patterns. The author says that any class can equip any items and the only thing that would happen is his load/weight would go up, which we later find out that not every class can equip any weapon, and there is various penalty's. Another thing that urks me, is that either the translator is making somethings get lost in the process or the author just doesn't like to explain things that aren't bs. Let's also not forget the fact that somehow these guilds on day one (maybe an hour into playing (generous guess)) already have player blacksmiths that made them full sets of armor. Everything in the store has outrageous costs and yet these people somehow already make over five sets of armor. What about the cost of materials, items to help craft (anvils, hammers, calipers ect), place to craft (are they just going to pound iron in the middle of the road?), or even the fact that potions apparently have a 60% chance of failure, can blacksmithing not fail or even have a chance to make inferior/trash items at the least? Oh, and said guild also went into the middle of a dangerous forest (still can't be more than 2~ hours into the game) and found a chest at the top of a tree, which the author described that you could only see a small corner sticking out.The author said there was 5 different grades of equipment, "Bronze, Silver, Sold, Dark Gold and Legendary" (The translator/editor put in 'Sold', not me. But it's obviously gold). The mc gets a gold grade equipment pretty early which I was fine with because he used his past memories to get it. The piece of equipment, however, gives as much as one level up worth of stats, and lets him float like a fair- *cough cough* feather for 10 seconds. This, to me, seems like a high end bronze to mid silver piece of equipment. What would a piece of legend gear give? 3 levels worth of stats and the ability to read minds? But the only mind you can read being your own.....In short, this novels author changes his mind more than a girl changes clothes. (TS lyrics right there.)
i quite like this story. i like that the mc is actually smart and not the fake smart some are. i like that the mc is somewhat weak to strong, and took a interesting way to abuse his knowledge of the future.
Alright, I read up to give chapters and I somewhat enjoyed reading it. The premise of taking everything online was what captured my attention the most. the writing quality is good, could be better but it's much better than mine (kek) the characters are somewhat likable and the world background is good as well as the story development so far. keep it up and all the best for WSA
Too much plot armor. Power scaling is lacking. Mc' character is agreeable.Update is good.World Background is lacking maybe this is early chapters.
I just found this book and to be honest it is interesting. I like the way the story unfolds and it has plenty of details but not to many , just right to let your imagination create everything. All in all a good book.
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Any novel similar to top-tier providence deserves a thumbs up to me. The mc is probably not as much of an extremist as Han Jue, as he finds it ok for disciples to go down the mountain to the outside world if need be. This is unlike Han Jue who basically tells his disciples whose clan is about to be killed to stay put and not go out.The pace isn't too bad, it's more on the faster side, mostly because the mc is getting a bit too pampered by the system by gaining all the knowledge regarding arrays, a cauldron that can refine any pill with the highest quality without fail, and spring water that can accelerate growth of spiritual plants by a hundred years. Well it's not like I find it bad or anything.The characters are a-ok, the mc does stick to his values and his disciples feel much more naturally placed than last week's trial read that also makes use of a "taking in disciples system". It's because the 2nd disciple doesn't just instantly beat the 1st disciple mc got because of a different in quality, so it doesn't feel like the past disciples will be expendable and left behind.World background is alright, can't really comment about it on a 20chapter novel really
Rubbish translation on this novel. Too much machine-translation like phrases, too much unnatural syntax. Too many words repeated again and again.
So far so good, i love the pacing, not much filler, no chapter dragging, i hope this wii be continued, i was little fed up with these original novels that has thousands of chapters but little progression.
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