When I started reading, I would like to say it looked promising, but it didn't. (Things like dying in 2 hits or some crap even though he is a famed player, legendary set and the other guy has 11 pieces, says the attack can go through any defense and still gets blocked.) My biggest problem with this story is the inconsistencies. The author contradicts himself at the very least six times per chapter, and in the middle of doing so makes up new rules after he already explained the rules of what he was talking about. 'This potion has a 1% chance of success.' A couple of paragraphs down 'Because the heart and brain is smashed in, this potion has a 50% chance of success!' The author says the npc's are smart, which when he meets one for the first time they seem like actual humans, then 30 seconds later you can't think of them as anything but npc's because they turn brain dead and act on set patterns. The author says that any class can equip any items and the only thing that would happen is his load/weight would go up, which we later find out that not every class can equip any weapon, and there is various penalty's. Another thing that urks me, is that either the translator is making somethings get lost in the process or the author just doesn't like to explain things that aren't bs. Let's also not forget the fact that somehow these guilds on day one (maybe an hour into playing (generous guess)) already have player blacksmiths that made them full sets of armor. Everything in the store has outrageous costs and yet these people somehow already make over five sets of armor. What about the cost of materials, items to help craft (anvils, hammers, calipers ect), place to craft (are they just going to pound iron in the middle of the road?), or even the fact that potions apparently have a 60% chance of failure, can blacksmithing not fail or even have a chance to make inferior/trash items at the least? Oh, and said guild also went into the middle of a dangerous forest (still can't be more than 2~ hours into the game) and found a chest at the top of a tree, which the author described that you could only see a small corner sticking out.The author said there was 5 different grades of equipment, "Bronze, Silver, Sold, Dark Gold and Legendary" (The translator/editor put in 'Sold', not me. But it's obviously gold). The mc gets a gold grade equipment pretty early which I was fine with because he used his past memories to get it. The piece of equipment, however, gives as much as one level up worth of stats, and lets him float like a fair- *cough cough* feather for 10 seconds. This, to me, seems like a high end bronze to mid silver piece of equipment. What would a piece of legend gear give? 3 levels worth of stats and the ability to read minds? But the only mind you can read being your own.....In short, this novels author changes his mind more than a girl changes clothes. (TS lyrics right there.)
