Why did this novel stop getting updated?
gotta be honest the gramma is Bad, Story needs editing and pls too much Young master this Young master that too . it Had Potential but after the first 8 Chaps it got pretty fast boring
Very interesting start. I would also like to see this continued!
The grammer in this novel is really good and i understand everything happening really well. The mc is very interesting and we as a reader are seeing him grow from being a simp. The lore and world building is unique and leaves you with many mysteries
Honestly... a fun read but the amount of repeated paragraphs worded differently are a joke. I literallly read 7 paragraphs that described "dragon powers" back to back that all said the same thing using different words. Which essentially explained nothing at all. ... the story feels like it was written by a kid with a harem fantasy and a hero complex. Only 40 chapters in and the usual tripe has already been used... such as dead family and only has sister, bank robbery that he prevented, saving rich people and earning millions in just days... worth reading, not worth paying for.
I would rate this as a story who takes out a lot of the elements which were over the moon from "I have a mension in the post apocalyptic world". The story development is sometimes uninteresting. We want to see the MC struggle more in the "real" world of politics and economy. This is missing a lot and was addressed more in the "I have a mension in the..." Overall the story is a good read. The system is logic. The MC is unique and timejumps to progress the story are logically build.
This novel will surprise you with hidden depths, chapters down the line. I have to admit the writing style takes some getting used to--it's MC's perspective, a reckless, fearless (literally in his case), headstrong young man trying to mend his relationship with his (physically stronger, more handsome,better)younger brother. The flavor is very shonen-y and some questionable topics (abuse, harassment, misogyny, inherent sociopathy in some people) are handled rather lightly.And then we get further into the plot, delved around the reason MC wished to turn back time: his brother'sawakening, estrangement, and death. It's both good and bad for me because I'm not really a fan of the very game-esque lingo and mechanics, but the sprinkles of information is tonnes better than infodump, while also working to further the plot as MC discovers the hidden side to whatever's going on in his world
Not bad actually. Your story have unlimited potential especially set in a sandblock game like Minecraft. Character development is quite slow but smooth, suggest add in modpacks especially RL craft to make your story make more "sense". I can see your pattern of the story and plot, super excited for the next series.
I've only read 3 chapters... i guess? But I can assure you that you'll be surprised while reading this novel from this author. You will encounter some sorta words that not so many people would think about! 5 ratings... the uploads aren't failing me, this author deserve much more love than this.
For those wondering about Lu Ze at the ending of this novel. He is the protagonist from Pocket hunting dimension.
I'm also wary about reaching full circle in the near future - Brendan starting to lie (out of embarrassment), therefore Deirdre distrusting him all over again, blah blah blah... the usual boring shit.
Great story. Enjoy reading it.