Lost a lot of brain cells reading this, the world building is prettg nice, but after chap 21 I couldnt keep going with the other aspects.
If you feel like it and has a lot of time to waste, you can read this, if not, well...
You SHOULD get another one to invest your valuable time.
Bland. Bland as heck. The dialogue is just weird and the sentences seemed forced. Info dumps don't help and the MC is basically a robot. It was a chore to read this.
Wonderful story telling and from a reader who has read the previous book Top star this one has much better scope and story. The characters are well described with a clear world background. A well written start The only problem is a bit of lack of emotions conveyed. But this gets better over time so no problem
Looks like the summary here is incorrect. Here's a basic overview: Su Hao is a regular student. However, one day he finds himself transported to a new world, one full of sprites, creatures with magical abilities.Errrr... that's pretty much it, and I don't have the flair to make a fancier summary.
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It's well written and an amzing novel! Cant wait for more chapters author, keep it up like you always do. I recommend you all to read it for a great time and add it to library to keep updated on these very nice chapters. Great start!
Very detailed. I get caught up with the mangled violence at the beginning. I absolutely love it. It’s something I can get lost in easily and I very much appreciate that.
The start has many info for my small brain to process but I get the hang of it later on. ? Nice nice nice.....And your grammar was okay. The plot was hooking and the narration was smooth and fluent. Nice it going and I enjoyed the reading experience that you gave. Kudos and Peace ✌️
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Honestly this is my first review, I just wanted to say I started reading this story with no expectations since it really wasn't popular but the moment I read that first chapter, ooooh boy was it good, and ooohhh boy did I buy that privilege.