Trash Mc is too much of a man child.Wasted my time reading in freewebnovel.com................................,..........................
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Hello, fellow author. I'm going to give you some constructive criticism. 1: Please show what's happening in the story more. •In your story, you tell the reader that the character feels a certain way. Ex: "He felt confident." Here's an example of showing your protagonist's confidence."He raised his chin high, looked his opponent in the eye, and smirked." You can increase your word count if you explain each emotion. And your readers can immerse themselves better. 2: Please don't repeat the same information twice In the same chapter. •This disrupts the reader's immersion in the story. •I know it helps add word count, but that frustrates readers. 3: Your grammar needs some work. It's hard to immerse yourself in a book if there are many grammatical errors.
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As the first real reader review i shall tell you the person who is reading this because you want to know about the book to read the book because, it is a good story, so stop reading this and read the book.
Micheal is definitely one of my favourite characters; I mean who wouldn't like a confident and down to earth individual. This story is really a plate-full, really gives you something to ponder about, about everything you've ever come to believe as 'true' or 'real'. 'In the last days'...the end really is near.
Wow, this is actually a really good book! The story line is well thought out and interesting and the writing style is descriptive yet easy to understand. I think the author could work on giving the characters more depth but to he fair, this is clearly a plot-based book. Keep up the good work!
I will start from the beginning :)
The cover page is original and catchy (different from what we usually see here)!
The title... in general I don't like most of the titles on Webnovel, but I know that the app prevents you from adding titles that already exist, etc. so can be problematic to find it title, that will relevant to the content. Yours is GREAT!
The few chapters I read are interesting, the storyline, characters, description of the background, etc... everything is in right place.
You're doing great!
It's a ****ty novel, don't trust the coments(except mine).
So far its got an interesting direction and, plot developments, characters interactions and overall world building elements. Let us see how it progresses
Good stuff right here.
We got a good concept with a nice plot and good characters that get equally good development!
All in all it's really good, if any of you is reading this review just go ahead and read it your not going to be disappointed I swear!