So before I delete this novel from my library purely because I do not want to see the cover again I wanted to tell you to delete that cover because it is horrible, atrocious, I mean if I saw that cover on my first time using Webnovel I would delete the app it looks like it’s made for children delete it
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I dont get it he dies goes back to past but in another similar world and just dousn't even remember, care, or question the well being of his original parents and keeps thinking about on revenge against people who killed him but those people are not them this is not the same world
Can't wait to know more in this story..Author keep working harder and my wishes for you to do both works properly will succeed...!!All the best..!!
My only problem is the grammer, you put "u" instead of "you", that's why I gave it 3 stars and 5 on word building. I suggest to the improve on the grammar and spelling, maybe use something like Grammarly which is quite cheap and would help the author to improve.
Although the novel sounds like a copy of Jay Aslan, this one has a lot of originality put into into it. I suggest the other readers to give it a try and see if this is for you or not.
I wasn't 100% on board at the start of it, but I kept going and I'm glad I did. I wasn't sure about the style but he changed it later on and the story is very much worth it! Despite some errors in the beginning, this work is expertly crafted. The world building is spectacular and every chapter has a sense of wonder to it. Every sentence is valuable this way because it opens up so many possibilities.
Honestly I'd recommend this to anyone.
These are the types of stories wn needs more of.
this novel has tons of potential just executed wrong it has my favorite novel setting and trope which is to be reborn in a novel as a extra but this time the mc is born a god which is very unique and the grammar was poor but you can understand it but their are tons of bad things for example the charcters dont feel real to me like i have no emotional connection to them the mc can destroy the whole world and bring it back 2 seconds later so i dont have to care about them and the teachers and students are allowing the mc's host to go to school like he doesnt have the strongest god in his body they just treat him normally i think the Arthur should rewrite this but instead charles should have his old personality instead of this new cold one and he slowly unlocks his full power instead of having all of it in his own body this time too where he can go to the academy and help brian and get close to the other charcters
The MC's shamelessness knows no bounds and thanks to his unique character, I am in love with the story. Everything about it so far, screams mystery and I am looking forward to unraveling more. Keep up the good work author.
perfect. . . ı am looking forward reading the whole novel...
This novel has very unique ideas for a genre that’s usually generic. The author does a great job in the world building with how detailed the discriptions are. If you’re looking for a cultivation novel that paves its own path, this is your best option.
recently, every second chapter uploaded is scuffed. the last part of it is missing and replaced with a copy of the first part. it's making the story patch and incomplete, since there are no holes in its progression.
I saw a lot of reviews mentioning how submissive the protag is but I wanted to give the story a fair shot. But I’m at chapter 55 and it’s just getting worse it doesn’t even feel like he has any atvantages from his cheats. They still just equal to his sister who has no cheats and is only a year older than him. They feel more like master servant than a real family.