Amazing nightmare concept!!! How you got this interesting concept? Keep on updating new chapters as the story seems interesting and can get a huge success. Best wishes.
I really like the practicality of this novel and the lowkeyness of the mc. Tho its update is not up to par its still worth it. The storyline is getting better im still hoping for more bcoz the chapters are still so little.
I really don't like novels were the MC breaks the entire world's system in the first chapters. Why even spent time establishing a world, not that copying pokemon is great, but still, why spent the time only to shatter everything to make the MC look OP?There are no twists, no suspense and no immersion. This is literally a stomp festival in written form.Might be fun as a fanfiction for pokemon, but as a stand alone work? Just terrible.
Claims to be a system novel but doesn’t show the system, the whole point of a system is a visual representation of the MC’s growth without that it just looks like the MC is delusional.
I never thought that it would be translated again after being droped the first time. I relly loved its unique plot and i found the relationship between charachters to be intresting and lifelike.
Liking this story. Has some fun elements and clever twists, and the writing style is very easy to read. (Also, I just caught up with the latest chapter so I have no idea re update stability, but Webnovel would not let me post a review without rating this. Not wanting to penalize a writer due to such nonsense, I gave a 5 istead of a “neutral” 3.)
I'm putting my time on the line for this seemingly unique Xianxia novel, hope I am not dissapointed
This is an unpolished gem with intricate character and world design. Although some will find it hard to follow due to technical detail, I personally fell that the writer has put her love to it and strive for a better writing. Can’t wait for update please support this writing!
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Good to read Usually I am not much interested in cultivation novel but this is good and I have author another work. I came here to support him to write novels.
The story is good so far! I like how you vividly narrated the story and the development was nice and steady. I love the plotline and it was an enjoyable read! Keep it going until you reach a million views and you will find it pleasing to the eyes. Characters are showed well with various emotions and I can't help but be attached to them. Kudos and your reader here. Peace ✌️