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Constructive Criticism; Make the Prologue an Auxiliary chapter, and, if you are not going to have any other chapters that'll throw off the numbering of the chapters, remove the numbering.Well written by my standpoint, but definitely an erotica (of the few I've skimmed, one of the better). However, I don't much like erotica, so sorry, removed from my library.Keep up the good work, and try to update at-least once every other week lest you loose those who'd enjoy this story.;,;.
I really enjoyed this read so far especially the MC who gives me Hikigaya Hachiman vibes as well as his chemistry with Lilith. As a true believer in giving an author time to reflect on what they do instead of posting daily without having time to improve I like how this is a weekly which let's the author work on anything they may have trouble with which is awesome.Gambateyo Author-san
I appreciating the TL for translation quality and update stability at 5 star.I just don like all about story development and character design so i give 1 star to it. And world Background is slightly passable at 3 star..If you ask why?Because i've read it until final chapter.Story so cliche and like copy-paste work from other novel, just. Don't expect any romance in this novel because romance only appear too late in 10 last chapter. Story about its heroin is repeating and repeating. Heroin always goes to high background/faction and waiting. When MC goes to meet her. She always separating to join higher faction. You know it is repeating atleast 5 times!!!! How boring!!!..About character design, i just rate it lowest beyond lowest of all Xianxia Novel because of what?All enemy doesnt have brain.. All character close to MC doesnt have slightly bit gratitude and always expecting MC to help them but without any values.All of character always look down toward MC yeah so boring.Why do i read this boring novel to end?Maybe i have big dao heart and HAHAAHA OR MOST STUPID CN READER IN THIS WORLD.SO I CAN GIVE THIS HONEST REVIEW TO YOU ALL???????
MC right here is a legit villain. Exactly what I've been looking for author, I'll be giving all of my golden tickets and power stones now. Don't abandon this novel it's amazing
What next now? I want to see what Ve is going to come with.
Great read, can’t wait for the next book!
Loving it already, thanks Muse. It is a great start, happy new year!
why i cant read 229?
Give us more chapters please
love it!!!