Great novel, my only complaint is that sometimes it can get confusing. For example, I can't even tell what the unnamed skill does, at first I thought it was like full counter but then mc was hurt, so not full counter, so maybe half counter, but then somehow it made the queen stronger which confuses me because she was hurt by it, etc. Or why mc would use something on her that makes her stronger. Idk the entire goblin queen arc was extremely confusing, however the rest of the novel is great
To be sincere, i love books with nice book covers and I’m not really a fan of LGBT.. no offence.
One reason i read this book was the author and I’m hoping the author won’t suddenly stop updating
Well... four chapters has been released so far and i think I’m drawn to the characters especially the mysterious roommate who definitely is Ella’s other half
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Anime... I’m a great fan
Hoping for more updates and i highly recommend
I really hope you will come back soon and continue this story, your book is why I installed webnovel
Okay. This is my first review so I did not know it wasn't a simple 1 to 5 stars. If it was i swear I would've given 5 stars but I'm not the only one who knows Parmesan's updating schedule. I know it exists now but it didn't before. Anyway now that I've given a reason for not giving 5 stars (Don't kill me), Ican get down to the story. This was definitely a new experience for me as this introduced me to the eavesdropping genre. I hadn't realized until then but I'd never thought about how life would go if other people could heat your thoughts. And the author writes it all out beautifully. On to the pacing. This particular book is abysmally slow, buy you won't realize it unless you take a step back (and even then you might miss it)May the spoilers (not really spoilers) begin.First we are introduced to C. a human stickman. That isn't really what he is, but as he is faceless, it's a good analogy.Yup. it's exactly as I said it, a faceless mc. Check the tags again. Harem? Check. He rizzed them up without a face. That's pretty hard to beat, but I digress. Throughout the course of the story so far we are introduced to what you would call "cookie cutter characters" A shy but handsome 'mc' , a proper class president, an overprotective childhood friend and so on. But remember, this is a yandere novel. So throw morals out the window. With this author though, that still isn't enough. Read and you'll see why
first of all I'd love to say how seemingly slow the NPCs and Monsters are like how come they're so foolish I mean admittedly they are a bunch of bots essentially but like still also literally the whole world lack character it's practically a one man show that's kinda slow to read it's boring honestly doesn't even utilize the game and system qualities that would have at least made it bearable but nah leveling is just I kill one and dozens of monsters and all other foolish things
Grammar needs major reviewing including syntax, misplaced words and faulty proofreading (e.g. faulty words such as 'minister' instead of 'monster'). Please fix the grammar since as it is it is not worth going premium. Furthermore, descriptions lack depth and color. Needless repetition of simple words make the writing seem inept or deeply disrespectful to readers.
Nonetheless, the story develops at an okay pace. There are no for the genre odd jumps in power and it is possible to feel how the protagonist starts understanding things better and develops his skills. Other relatively organic growth is seen as the MC gets to know more people and thus gets a better grip on both his immediate surroundings and the world. Interactions are often however bland surface level affairs, where little though seems to be given by the MC apart from if they gained something and if they like the other person. Rare is the moment when any reflections about motives are given.
Speaking of motives, the MCs motives are a bland affair with little development. It seems like the author decided to do a Pokémon and just point them at a competition and then see what happens. That is fine for a start, but as the story progresses there is need of developing the why and the implications. That is not done. We see no added depth to the MC, nor do we see any growth.
This is really too bad since the world the story takes place in seems like a marvel of magic and adventure, filled with interesting organisations with individual interests that still don't act like complete assholes. Additionally, the mix of magic and technology might make for interesting world-building and something to add depth to social structure (for example why are the organisations like they are), and it would be interesting to see a characters growth and exploration of this world.
Hello everyone, my father passed away while I was in the early stages of translating this novel, so I didn’t focus on the novel and didn’t rush the editor. After that, QD decided to drop the novel because other similar novels were not as popular as they had hoped, so they aren’t willing to risk this investment.
However, I don’t want to give up on this novel, and I feel like many readers are eagerly awaiting new chapters. While the TV show is interesting, the novel is much better.
Long story short, I’m taking on all the risk in translating this, so I hope that you readers will support this work by voting and commenting and sharing the novel with your friends. Many Thanks.[img=recommend]
Please leave comments in the chapters if you have any questions or suggestions.
I can guarantee one chapter a day in the beginning with mass releases from time to time, and if we well, we can go from there to arrangements like two chapters a day or extra weekly chapters etc etc.
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Wow, what a really strong start to what feels like an amazing novel! The author has a way with words and his ability to set the scene and create an immersive world demonstrates this. I look forward to seeing where the author takes the story. Keep up the good work. [img=recommend]
(Read to chapter 54)
1. It’s not exactly the flow of writing that’s a problem it’s more that clearly there’s been a lack of care in the editing and checking of grammar, spelling and punctuation making it not hard per se but irritating to read.
2. The story itself seems ok but it also seems quite rushed in some areas and the writing itself doesn’t absorb the reader. There are constant coincidences and plot armout. “You know that girl you had *** with? Turns out she has a special bloodline that means she can become super strong with you so that you can carry on having *** with her and have a superficial relationship!”
3. In my opinion, the mc has an unlikeable personality. He’s rash, arrogant and makes impulsive decisions.
4. The world building is pretty lackadaisical in my opinion.
By the way, I’ve focused mainly on the negatives simply because they stand out more to me. It’s not terrible but it’s also not very immersive.
Almost slept reading this...not gonna lie but the genre itself is boring i love how everyone is making similar novels cause this genre got popular and most of them are direct copies ...Anyway i almost fell asleep reading this dropping in chapter 10
Sucks that he has dropped this since he has not p[posted a single chapter in 8 months. I was really enjoying where everything was going, except for the really small chapter size.
Towards the later chapters, it started to remind me of a novel that did not get picked for translations that was about someone being the Admin of a rich people chat group. He would invite rich people into the chat group and they would be able to buy amazing cultivation items for real-life cash. And the MC would be the benefactor of the money.
But in this one, he invites a few people into a part of a system. It's really only the cash shop of the system. And that would allow them to buy items for real-life money. The world also started to change into a cultivation world and more random people were about to get a shop system.
Basically, the world was becoming pay to win. And I was looking forward to more. Sadly I was disappointed in the end. This would be a 4.5-star novel if it was not dropped.