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Hello and an honest review from me. The story was good, minor grammar mistakes so that's great. The flow of the storyline in the first chapter is simple without any twist or turn. Other than that, keep up the good work author

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I literally cant read the story and follow whats happening, in the first chapter alone he gets a call then gets into his car and then it jumps to he is in a car with someone and they dead leg each other? then he gets a call about a medical transport and told that it isn't a rally, then it cuts to him writing down some race cars racing results.
Worse than MTL and that's really telling.

Hmmmm this is a pretty decent novel...... Though it makes the same mistake that’s pretty common in writing and publishing novels..... WE NEEEDDDD MASSS RELEASEEEEEEEEEEE....... even thou that’s that still ur doin a great job writing

This is a breath of fresh air. Different idea, relatable characters (to me) that are not one dimensional.

I recommend this book if you want something different from the usual garbage on webnovel. Oh and of you are rich. The chapters airer expensive af

Hello, Author here, this is to let everyone know that despite many trials and tribulations life is currently throwing at this author, this author is going to keep on updating whether slow or fast and bring the novel to its satisfactory ending.Alright, then the shameless five stars are for all the hard work and effort that I have put into making the novel.Thank you. Take care you all. Bye Bye.

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Good story I looked the idea.  The English isn't that good and the usage of quotes and presentation of dialog is very odd but if you look past that it's a fun short read.

Excellent style of writing and some thing amazing is at this age it's commendable.
Author knows very well to describe the scene and shown a very good selection of words to describe it.
Author has managed to create a great start and very eager to go though the balance chapters.

Im giving perfect rating to morivate you to add more chapters because this is fun to read i would really love it more if you make chapters every single day thank you

I Have a Cheat System in the Apocalypse is a story about Felix, who has a system (I think), trying to do something?

Admittedly, chapter six isn't a good point to give a objective review on a novel, however the first six chapters are so bad I cannot continue reading this.

First off, the writing quality. This whole novel reads like you were hit by a truck and are now attempting to recall what happened while under anesthesia. Nothing at all makes sense in this novel. The first six chapters are so badly written that you will only be able to pick up some very superficial information. Mutants are being hunted by humans. Mutants have a school. The main character *might* have a system. That's really all I gleaned. (1/5 stars)

Moving onto story development. It's awful. This might have to do with the way this story was written, but very little makes sense. I was planning on giving a general rundown of the first six chapters but I can't be asked to make sense of that convoluted mess. Anywho, the pacing is absolutely insane, main character is randomly thrown into combat multiple times, each reason he starts combat is increasingly more stupid than the last. After the main character nearly gets assassinated, but narrowly wins, a intelligent gorilla attacks them. The main character saves his assassin (thats right), and kills the gorilla. Promptly following, he falls over and dies. After this, we are suddenly thrown into a MMORPG, because why not. I could continue rambling on about various inconsistencies and plot holes that are in the first six chapters, but all you need to know is that almost every single character, idea, place, setting, that is introduced doesn't make sense. (1/5 stars)

Character design. I don't really know all that much, main character has a weird obsession with money, has a close friend, that's about it. Characters are also convoluted and the main character seems like he has some form of autism, so I'm just going to default this to two stars. (2/5 stars)

World background is a mess. So, from what vague inferences I can make, this is a apocalyptic world, where humanity is being attacked by various mutant beasts. So, in spite of this, the government decides to hunt down and kill humans with abilities? Anyway, school the main character has a super-powerful mutant in charge, but all it takes to pressure him is a mech and like ten police officers. Well, author only spent about five chapters in the real world before the main character dies and goes into a MMORPG world, so whatever. (1/5 stars)

Overall, this is a very bad novel, but in a new way. I haven't seen as many novels that are as convoluted as this. Writing quality is very bad, and causes a lot of confusion right off the bat. The story development and world background don't help this either, making reading this even more confusing. I would recommend the author to use a story board and plan ahead, and at the very least fixing the abhorrent pacing issues. I give this novel 2.0 stars out of 5.