This novel is absolutely amazing! Even though there are only a few chapters so far, I'm already in love with it. The characters are perfect, the world-building is immersive, and it all feels so well-crafted. I can already tell it's only going to get better as it progresses. Take your time and enjoy this masterpiece it's worth it!
I enjoy the fight scenes in this book to an extent, Tho I think they should be some brutal scenes to really bring out the intensity. Overall, I'd rate it 4.0 based on what I've read so far."
Its very interesting novel I hope you give it a chance to read
Please support me guys, this is my first time being a writer.Correct me If I make a mistake somewhere I will be glad to amend my mistake.Thanks a lot.
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
Woo.. i like where its going, pretty good flow of the story. **BUT** what about " The supporting character's harem is very normal" what about this??
This author has a novel called "Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World". This novel and that almost the same as story wise.I am at 29th chapter so i will give spoilers until that chapter as a basic explanation. Also it will include spoiler from other novel just for comparison. An engineer goes back in time paralel world. Its paralel in name only. America is Ameritha, Tesla is Volta etc. other than that everything is the same. That engineer sees trains brake system is bad and invents(copies) better one. Makes money and goes on more businesses. At this point after train brake system, he goes for car. For making car bussiness he also goes for petrol/oil bussiness.In other novel that i mentioned, its the same story slightly different. Rather than one MC there are 2, and rather than black racisism, there is silver hair or something racisism(i remember the reason why silver hair people are treated bad but anyway). In both story, MC(s) goes to a banker for money and investment reasons and so on. I liked that novel so i started this one and this one also goes with same quality but after reaching 300+ chapters, author just stopped for that novel and started new ones. So even tho he finished his first novel "Reincarnated as an Imperial Prince
It a good story. I'm simply waiting for the updates. So far, I had a good time reading this. Btw, good book cover. I don't really know what else to say.
World Background: Yet to see, but so far it looks good!! ? Story Development: Top Class! ?Characters: Su Xiaobai is best, followed by Matriach Su! Writing Quality: Best! Update Stability; Soooo Many chapters in single day! ?
I fount this novel one day ago and did not stop reading until I had finished the entire thing. The characters are lovable and take logical actions that don’t leave you thinking that they are only doing something for the plot.The story so far is fun and has developed well with decent world building. The writer has not put himself into a corner and has allowed the story to progress steadily if a bit fast. The only problem I have with the writing it that there is sometimes letters or spaces missing which while they don’t destroy the reading experience or story can be quite annoying. All in all I think it an amazing novel and I would recommend it.
this book ? is the best so far.you are a wonderful writer at your level .
I loved the suspense of the book along with the character's growth. I was already hooked by reading tge synopsis and cannot wait on how the coming story will unfold.??You do not have any grammatical mistakes, the writing is smooth as well?Will definitely follow this book till the end.?