I highly recommend this story to anyone looking for a great read?
i read the first five chapters and is pretty much interesting, its the typa stories I enjoy; vyle creatures, a system and dark fantasy. And have a tag of romance which i like pretty much, I just hope it will be good writen
This is the best SoL novel I read!The world building and connecting the emotions of the various family members of the MC in combination with the growth of the character is amazing!It is a really unique novel and the first novel I give a complete 5 stars and totally mean it.Because it is absolutely captivating!Keep up the good work, and when it comes to the major events in the future, please try to keep the MC with a healthy and positive mindset, because her past life already was quite depressing enough.Thank you for the consideration.
I won't comment on the story as I've only read half of the first chapter. Instead I'd like to offer some advice. I was taken aback by the writing quality which seemed more like a proper book than a webnovel story but that's also the issue. The writing quality is too good/different for this website that most people won't actually want to read it so I recommend instead posting the story to RR where readers are more used to and willing to read this level of writing otherwise I believe this story will be buried and forgotten on this website.
This should be interesting. We can never have enough Idol books, but now a system fantasy idol book?If this continues in its path, it is bound to gain a live-action adaptation soon.
This is a shameless review but this story is like a fine wine and the more you read the more chapter you will want to continue... Trust me, you won’t just love it—you’ll need it.Let me break it down:1-The Action: Battles so intense, you'll feel your pulse race faster than Akira dodging a dungeon boss.2-Humor That Kills ( will be shown way later when he gets his character changing: Literally. Akira’s taunts are so good they might as well be classified as a weapon.3-Heartfelt Moments: Beneath the sass and the battles, this story has an emotional core that hits hard. Akira’s journey isn’t just about revenge—it’s about finding his place in a broken world. 4-The Plot Twists: Think you’ve seen it all? Nope. The surprises in this story will leave your jaw on the floor.
so like me, you also write using the first pov narrative... but this style is only meant for story with a nuance of comedy or to be exact, the English words should be casual and entertaining because the one that is speaking is the characters, not the author. Too much description is also a no no to this style.. why? because if you tell a story yourself, you won't yap about everything you saw right? However the content is interesting,, keep it up!!
Very Interesting and has Potential, I recommend giving it a chance.
The book has potential, though I'm not feeling any vibe sha but the book is good♥️?a great read with lot twists
I don't know what to tell you except for this story is peak fiction. I know it might seem slow at first but trust me, it'll pick up pace before you even know it. Start reading now before you regret it for the rest of your life, hoping you had read this work of art. Okay I've reached the word count. pls give my story a chance guysfor my female audience:
After reading all the chapters, I think I should give it a rating, so here I am. One thing’s clear—the story isn’t the best, but it’s definitely not the worst. It’s absolutely worth reading!
Everything is peak so far...