Terlalu banyak omong kosong, dan MC lebih seperti bocah idiot menjijikan, apalagi dengan beberapa wanita SH!T di sekelilingnya saat di kerajaan Orma, penulis mati saja kau idiot korea!!
It's a good story and have fun elements also. it's from other perspective of story where villain have also role for its character. It's all good just time flies realy fast man 2.5k years have gone in the story if disciples go for experience then they came after decades not just 1 or 2 years. In this I really feel that they are really cultivators have long life but I think it's also too much dude 100 years are ok but 2.5k seems to long with their talent and resources. All in all it's a good story.
I think its great please update and post more chapters ill be surr to drop stones and likes and comments to get more chapters and see hownstory ends up
At first, I didn’t think much about it, just any other novel with a good rating. Some theme , it’s a bit tedious, like HunterXHunter , where Togashi write really to much although he’s a mangaka and not a writer, but probably It’s because of his physiological issues.Anyway really like the comedy, the protagonist is particular and I’m curious about how she’ll evolve.Some “plot twist” I can a bit predict that because it’s intuitive, but it’s not necessary a bad thing, not always.And, like HunterXHunter, I will read it until it end (hope it will), because the story is very intriguing.
Writing Quality (1)Why? It wasn't even translated, you claim that "you" translate it but you've just copied and cut it on MTL.. at least try to "change" some "unique" chinese slang on the novel.. You're just blatantly claiming you translate it... Have some shame will ya'?Story development (2) Can be change if the "translator" is good..Didn't manage to pass chapter 4, I would rather read some comments than read this badly "translated" novel..
everything happens so quickly I don't even know where this is heading to HAHAHAHAHAHAH also the naming the shadow wolf in the start has a name until later he only calls it shadow wolf same with the others like the names of the gryphons there r 2 gryphons male and female named Xiao Jin and Xiao yin (correct me if I'm wrong), when he breeds the 100 gryphon legion there is one baby platinum grade which he named Xiao Jin I think which supposedly from the adult male but it says it's from the female one, then the female one became nameless which "it doesn't matter" cuz for the female gryphon it's fine because of the grade of the baby male which is higher than the female, see even I who is writing this review isn't even sure if they understand my explanation HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I know it's cuz of my grammar but please fix the naming it's kinda annoying on figuring out who is who if u kept changing the names HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
The story is kinsda slow until 150sh chapter but the development is well done so fae. I have read until 250 chapters of raw its funny how he is still training until now, he hasnt even gone to college yet. He isnt even OP he got the stats power thingy but he needs to train too, to be the very best :p just like how ash trains for over 20 years and never loses his youthful look. I have rated the world background 3 star as i havent seen much yet of the world building he is still in his highschool years training and expanding his knowledge.
It’s good. Like, real good. ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I read a similar story to this novel, but there the villain decided to give up original story and behave like a villain after 1000 restarts.. Seriously, thousand.. There were many other problems in that story. This novel doesn't has the problem which were in that novel. Also, the editing is quite sharp here. This is a very good crisp story. Do read it
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Its the second time I've heard of a "SSR" today, what exactly is it? Above SSS? This new term feels very forced to me lol
I read until the first 15 chapters cause i couldn‘t handle it anymore. The writing is all over the place. Much happens but you can only really understand some parts cause the situations aren‘t really well explained. New progress to the story isn‘t slowly introduced but as a reader you just get thrown into it. *** for Author***In my opinion the idea of the story is great and has a very good potential. The only part thats bugs me is the writing style or the absence of any good structure in the chapters. The chapters only have a really rough structure like Beginning -> Action -> End of situation. Adding introductions or background information for new appearing characters or any real introduction for the story would probably be a good idea. There are almost no descriptions so the Tempo of the story is far to fast to get into it. And if there are descriptions they are all over the place and not really good integrated.As a reader I get the feeling that the beginning of the story is just written down without further thinking to get it to a point where the real plot should start. So I‘m dropping it since if I can‘t get into the beginning of the story there won‘t be a chance for the rest of the story.